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    Mr. Key (4-4) vs Telekinetic (1-0)

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    14 sounds good
    GL Chewy

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    Kid its human nature to have ups and downs… but hell
    I blame your father cause even the upbringing you L’s
    I’m making kids pay… contact the IRS for the fee rate
    Cause if dope lines got taxed you’d get a fucking rebate
    Watch the future waste away with your motto replaced
    Cause ya food for thoughts gettin like that Schiavo case
    This lame bubblegum shit these kids got is utter shame
    &Mr. Keys Styles Chewy like joinin all his other names
    A lames been on my dick from the beginning of this shit
    Cause I could raise minimum wage and still incomes a bitch
    I’ll diminish you kid, with shit tighter than a photo finish
    So don’t blame the league… blame whoever put you in it
    They were taking pity to help the kid that nobody likes
    But when you were told to be yourself…
    ……………………………..^That’s always bad advice
    And for you it’s twice as bad… your dope and I’m a liar
    You couldn’t suck more if your were a fucking vampire
    All my punches are fire… so I’ll teach what I’m wielding
    &Have your head start burning without a school building

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    Tele, aint been shit since Jr, and the reasons aint hard to tell
    brought his “Aye” game the past 8 weeks…
    …………cuz hes been screamin it from the sidelines of LLL
    I went there oh well, but ill give a hand for ur rhymes now
    N congratulate u for entry in LLL,when all the dope heads signed out
    Its my time now, u were the HW champ, but shoulda lost sooner
    But u proved u were jus semi-decent, when u lost that round in Jr
    But enuff wit personals im defeatin T how? Jus rippin his liver
    Punches will make him Senile……..more like drowned in the river
    Ur rep is what withers, n im destroyin it at every chance n occasion
    Leavin u in estate of mind so demolished, ull need brain renovation
    Beat who ur facin?, that’s mutiny U were always the jr ship, bitch
    So ill make u walk the plank, after I beat u senseless with it
    Shit gets wicked, shots fire and its no doubt Ill nail ya
    And leave ya faggot ass out back….nowhere near Austrailia
    U fuckin failure, censor the scene when I leave u wit hollow tips
    Cause my gourmet, be to much for even his fat ass to swallow it
    U cant follow this, u aint pass the buck, n there far from ya grasp
    So u can bet ur bottom dollar on this loss..
    ....................................bitch it’s the only one that u have
    Artificial Intelligence

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    uppin for votes
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    Blah
    Sill no votes?

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    Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    A lames been on my dick from the beginning of this shit
    Cause I could raise minimum wage and still incomes a bitch

    I used that wordplay last week. Booo.

    I’ll diminish you kid, with shit tighter than a photo finish
    So don’t blame the league… blame whoever put you in it
    They were taking pity to help the kid that nobody likes
    But when you were told to be yourself…
    ……………………………..^That’s always bad advice

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    I went there oh well, but ill give a hand for ur rhymes now
    N congratulate u for entry in LLL,when all the dope heads signed out
    Its my time now, u were the HW champ, but shoulda lost sooner
    But u proved u were jus semi-decent, when u lost that round in Jr
    U cant follow this, u aint pass the buck, n there far from ya grasp
    So u can bet ur bottom dollar on this loss..
    ....................................bitch it’s the only one that u have


    Key.

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    vote key, some wittier shit i guess, it was close, keys shit was played as hell most of it, but tele's punches just werent witty and didnt hit hard enough. plus sum his shit was played to...

    peace. hit up my battle with MAC

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    I’m making kids pay… contact the IRS for the fee rate
    Cause if dope lines got taxed you’d get a fucking rebate
    A lames been on my dick from the beginning of this shit
    Cause I could raise minimum wage and still incomes a bitch
    But when you were told to be yourself…
    ……………………………..^That’s always bad advice
    And for you it’s twice as bad… your dope and I’m a liar

    v.

    Its my time now, u were the HW champ, but shoulda lost sooner
    But u proved u were jus semi-decent, when u lost that round in Jr
    Ur rep is what withers, n im destroyin it at every chance n occasion
    Leavin u in estate of mind so demolished, ull need brain renovation
    Beat who ur facin?, that’s mutiny U were always the jr ship, bitch
    So ill make u walk the plank, after I beat u senseless with it
    U fuckin failure, censor the scene when I leave u wit hollow tips
    Cause my gourmet, be to much for even his fat ass to swallow it


    Key
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    DID HE USE A SHIAVO LINE?

    fuckin played and whack

    I’m making kids pay… contact the IRS for the fee rate
    Cause if dope lines got taxed you’d get a fucking rebate

    v.

    Its my time now, u were the HW champ, but shoulda lost sooner
    But u proved u were jus semi-decent, when u lost that round in Jr
    Ur rep is what withers, n im destroyin it at every chance n occasion
    Leavin u in estate of mind so demolished, ull need brain renovation
    Beat who ur facin?, that’s mutiny U were always the jr ship, bitch
    So ill make u walk the plank, after I beat u senseless with it


    hah. key came wittier.. no doubt.

    w/ key

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    /v Key.

    This was sort of close. Neither came amazing, but each had a few good hits. Tele came a bit played yea, with some weak concepts and shit. Still not bad though. Key also came decently here. Not much else to say.

    Beat who ur facin?, that’s mutiny U were always the jr ship, bitch
    So ill make u walk the plank, after I beat u senseless with it
    ^That was decent. Not much else in this battle, though.

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    Is chilly chill Mr. Key's Avatar
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    Welp its been real, sign me out for a while.
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    I’m making kids pay… contact the IRS for the fee rate
    Cause if dope lines got taxed you’d get a fucking rebat
    I’ll diminish you kid, with shit tighter than a photo finish
    So don’t blame the league… blame whoever put you in it

    vs

    Its my time now, u were the HW champ, but shoulda lost sooner
    But u proved u were jus semi-decent, when u lost that round in Jr
    Ur rep is what withers, n im destroyin it at every chance n occasion
    Leavin u in estate of mind so demolished, ull need brain renovation
    Beat who ur facin?, that’s mutiny U were always the jr ship, bitch
    So ill make u walk the plank, after I beat u senseless with it

    Both came good i thought it was pretty close, but key gets it a couple more lines i liked nice battle.

    vote - Key...

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