10 lines
house rules
10 lines
house rules
I'll let u set up the time limit for it ............check
so are you gonna spit or what??? im mean cmon dog i aint got all day....
he's a biter,not a fighter,he's a freak/
got the same rhyms everyday of the week/
like shit and ur rhyms... it's constant/
you cant have one without the other.. like bitches and nonsense/
you live in the land of misery,u vanish a mystery/
ended up sandwhiched between uncanded brand's of similes/
just call me fuckin god 'cause i end ya flow quick/
you lookin marage nigga 'cause ur act... fake as shit/
When 'people-spit' i come back wit 'evil-scripts',my fists compared to bear paws is 'equal-grip'/
A 'steady-force' wit a 'heavy-source'so get up off my dick!!!
Ur architecture is faluty...get help and reconstruct ur blueprint
I could drop a free post......and still out-value ur two cents
The gangsta persona is bullshit, wack rhymes prove ur lame
Probably the reason God's Lyrical Gift is about to get exchanged
Gay bastard, oh u in the closet, weell i'm doin u a favor.....
Now u ain't gotta camoflague this shit as metrosexual behavior
Dudes Rb's version of tiger woods, a consistant sub-par achiever
You're rhymes ill,......Jesus himself couldn't make me a believer
Considered whoring this mini me, lyrical guttin this worthless pig
But i'm civilized...........So in closing, read the bottom of my sig
Vote honestly and I promise the favor will be returned
uppin 4 votes............................................. .....
nothing...seriously..
vs.
The gangsta persona is bullshit, wack rhymes prove ur lame
Probably the reason God's Lyrical Gift is about to get exchanged
Dudes Rb's version of tiger woods, a consistant sub-par achiever
You're rhymes ill,......Jesus himself couldn't make me a believer
Considered whoring this mini me, lyrical guttin this worthless pig
But i'm civilized...........So in closing, read the bottom of my sig
v/naledge... damn these battles i've been voting on lately have been one sided
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173614
new link.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
uppin for votes...................................
nothing
v
Now u ain't gotta camoflague this shit as metrosexual behavior
Dudes Rb's version of tiger woods, a consistant sub-par achiever
You're rhymes ill,......Jesus himself couldn't make me a believer
Considered whoring this mini me, lyrical guttin this worthless pig
But i'm civilized...........So in closing, read the bottom of my sig
god.....dawg to self glorified you need serious work on ya punches....flow was tight but ya punches let ya dwn....use personals n shit also direct ya verse at ur opponent more
.....na.....go verse punches were ight could use a lil work...flow was ight n so was structure....ima have to go wiv na...for harder punches n more of a battle verse
v/na
hit up the battle between me n eminem pz...
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
el bumpo for mo votes yall .........................................
G.L.G.-
"he's a biter,not a fighter,he's a freak/
got the same rhyms everyday of the week/
like shit and ur rhyms... it's constant/
you cant have one without the other.. like bitches and nonsense/"
*best lines i think*
N.A.-
"Ur architecture is faluty...get help and reconstruct ur blueprint
I could drop a free post......and still out-value ur two cents
The gangsta persona is bullshit, wack rhymes prove ur lame
Probably the reason God's Lyrical Gift is about to get exchanged
Gay bastard, oh u in the closet, weell i'm doin u a favor.....
Now u ain't gotta camoflague this shit as metrosexual behavior
Dudes Rb's version of tiger woods, a consistant sub-par achiever
You're rhymes ill,......Jesus himself couldn't make me a believer
Considered whoring this mini me, lyrical guttin this worthless pig
But i'm civilized...........So in closing, read the bottom of my sig"-N.A.
*i lilkes all ur lines*
overall i think this battle was ok, but ima go wit N.A.
vote/N.A.
since i voted on ur's i would appreciate if u would vote on mine-
thanx...............
God'$LyricalGift
he's a biter,not a fighter,he's a freak/
got the same rhyms everyday of the week/
meh opener 2/5
like shit and ur rhyms... it's constant/
you cant have one without the other.. like bitches and nonsense/
i dont really get that ..lol 2/5
you live in the land of misery,u vanish a mystery/
ended up sandwhiched between uncanded brand's of similes/
iight 3/5
just call me fuckin god 'cause i end ya flow quick/
you lookin marage nigga 'cause ur act... fake as shit/
iight 2/5
When 'people-spit' i come back wit 'evil-scripts',my fists compared to bear paws is 'equal-grip'/
A 'steady-force' wit a 'heavy-source'so get up off my dick!!!
an ok closer 2/5
11/25 - Not a very good attempt i must say, you need to elevate a lot, word your lines better, and use punches!! no use battling without punches!
Na~Ledge
Ur architecture is faluty...get help and reconstruct ur blueprint
I could drop a free post......and still out-value ur two cents
nice opener 4/5
The gangsta persona is bullshit, wack rhymes prove ur lame
Probably the reason God's Lyrical Gift is about to get exchanged
get exchanged with what? 3/5
Gay bastard, oh u in the closet, weell i'm doin u a favor.....
Now u ain't gotta camoflague this shit as metrosexual behavior
lol 4/5
Dudes Rb's version of tiger woods, a consistant sub-par achiever
You're rhymes ill,......Jesus himself couldn't make me a believer
best line of both drops 4/5
Considered whoring this mini me, lyrical guttin this worthless pig
But i'm civilized...........So in closing, read the bottom of my sig
nice concept 4/5
19/25 - Totaly one sided battle, more harder hitting punches at you could become quite good!
Very 1 sided, gods you need to elevate, use punches and word your lines more better, na hit harder and u be iight
V/ Na~Ledge
PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLES IN RETURN! THANKS!
come on yall two votes to close this shit..................
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