Closed Mic...

[Xplicit Teknique]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...638post2123638

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...645post2123645

you better be mad tight,when you grab mic,
or you'll put up a sad fight,have a bad night
xpli-cit when i spit-it, the rap riddick
display you at my rap exhibit, under mc's i shitted
mental process-the rap pentium, my aresenal never an empty-one
twenty-one,with plenty heads to stun
realoaded, my shits just exploded
now the mic too hot to hold-it,this rap board i own-it
crown me king of the board,refer to me as the rap lord
perfect battle score,my rhymes addict you a like crack whore
too much to handle, i'll dis-mantle,
your brain as i spit at it from every angle,shove it down your throat and watch you strangle
xplicits lyrics just flows right,turn this forum into the closed mic,
better keep your hoes tight, or she'll be giving me blow tonight
lyrical gift watch my text-talk,you need to stick to Get On Da Mic with your X-box,
me and your girl have sex-talks, now listen as the bed-rocks
im not a player i just fuck-alot,and your girl just like to suck-a-cock
mine in particular,all in my balls like tesicular,
cancer,hit the strip club and leave with a dancer
iverson im the answer,the new evouliton like the lancer.

[Kairos]

Some alright ideas. Need to structure it better to help the flow. You had wordplay in the verse, keep that up. Some lines were raw, stick to it if you want to go in that direction.

[Irrelevance]

not bad.. like he said had some nice ideas... just work on a little morre of a focus on a topic... but yeah you had nice vocab flow was alright... add some mutlies... all around decent here. nice to see new talent comming onto the site..

[warchild]

This was decent could of been a lot better if you had better punchlines and better vocab youve got a decent flow so next time write better punches or add some witty lines and you'll get better feed.

Return the favour.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174166

[MXC]

Look I just start rapping but I feel whats been said
if everthing would've related to your topic it would've made it complete
but over all still liked what I heard
Nuff said,

[SMOKE]

decent shit.. could of been alot better tho.. shit g2g. ill leave some better feed in the morning pz

[Mahatma]

Your flow switches didn't work, if you're going to change you need to perfect making it seemless, and this wasn't. Your ideas need to be moved up a couple of notches. I liked the closed mic concept, that was slick. If you shove someones brain down their throaght they don't strangle, they choke, or would do, if it weren't for the fact they'd already be dead :Laughs: All in all this was okay but you'll have to practice more, because like Immortal Technique said - You're not dope enough to spit self-glorification.

Peace.

[Xplicit Teknique]

lol..yeah yeah, nah im open to criticizm..its what i post for to improve.