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30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
Checking in. May the best spit win.
Peace
..iN..
and may the best "text" win
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Kids Obsessed With My Text, Stalks Me In School And Takes Notes...
Whats Next? Make Your Own Punctuation Book Just To Create Quotes...
If Hope Floats Then I Take It Your Boat Must Have Sank A While Ago...
Pick Up The Flow, Try And Catch Up To My Speed, I'll Even Write Slow...
Mc4Eyes? What, Are You Some Kind Of Fucking Fast Food Type Dork?...
Get Myself Some Fries And Eat You Up Using Your Glasses As My Fork...
Always Asks His Friends To Pop His Cork To Get The Party Jumping...
After This An Air Compressor Couldn't Keep Your Heart Still Pumping...
Always Bumping My Tracks, Bitch, Should've Stayed Outta' My Way...
In Fact This Isn't Even A House Party, I'ma Kill You, I Don't Kid n' Play...
Jewelry Freak With A Credit Card, Always Searching To Discover Studs...
Ragged On So Much It's The Pussy's Part To Leave Covered In Blood...
Heard People Calling Him The Ex-Bread Fag, No Wonder - He Sucks...
Fired So Many Times He Started A 'Blow Job' Class n' Freely Instructs...
I'ma Rip Open Your Head And Stick My Dick 'Deep Inside The Mind'...
Jock Your Location And Fuck With The Few Thoughts That I Can Find...
Here's one true thing, test me, I show you how bitter pain is
The only way you'd Shock someone is with a finger in her anus
Bitch, I've been rhyming before you were even talking
And your rhymes are as boring as the voice of Steven Hawking
Now here's the reason you'll lose in case you need a reminder...
If your dick were any smaller, it would be a vagina
My rhymes are at a level higher than you get when you hit the spliff
The way you're dreading my presence, it's like you're braiding my Christmas gifts
Read my verse backwards, the result is the same, like it says "race car"
I've seen more interesting verses than yours written with just the space bar
Your rhymes are lazy, certainly the work of a slow slob
The only hard work you've done in your life was a blow job
I'm like the "Make A Wish" foundation, so just sit right there
And I'll make your dream come true, as long as it's a nightmare
Testing me was a mistake, and soon you'll see the blunder
People who read your text become jealous of Stevie Wonder
Shocker would only win if we were testing who's spit is worse
That and sex are the only times this kid could finish first
Your death comes fast as I aim for the heart and spit
'Cause Activating your Jheri curl doesn't mean you're startin' shit
To smart for this, but I'll put it so this slut understands...
I'll run more rings around you than a pimp's got on his hands
You spit a couple good bars, and that's nice to say
But even a broken clock is on time twice a day
If you want to compete, rise to my echelon quick
Or else you'll be down on you luck like you're sucking Leprechaun dick
You're just a rag that I'll use while I'm mopping the floors
Because Will Smith can spit rhymes more Shockin than yours
Of course I'm absurd, I'm ill while dispersin' the words...
How does it feel now that you're worse than a Nerd?
No beef. Just battle.
Peace
*edited for spelling*
Kids Obsessed With My Text, Stalks Me In School And Takes Notes...
Whats Next? Make Your Own Punctuation Book Just To Create Quotes...
Mc4Eyes? What, Are You Some Kind Of Fucking Fast Food Type Dork?...
Get Myself Some Fries And Eat You Up Using Your Glasses As My Fork...
THESE TWO WERE THE HIGHLIGHTS IN HIS VERSE
MCEYEZ VERSE WAS ALRIGHT NOTHING REALLY INTRESTED ME
Vote - Tru $hocka
He Had Better Punches..Cleary..His Flow Was Nice 2..Mc4eyes Came Ok..But Basic And His Punches Didn't Hit Hard..
I Liked The End Of This..Nice..And The Ones Metheus Quoted Were Nice 2..Keep Elevatin And 4eyes Come Harder Next Time..Pz..If Hope Floats Then I Take It Your Boat Must Have Sank A While Ago...
Pick Up The Flow, Try And Catch Up To My Speed, I'll Even Write Slow...
Tru-$hocka
-Pick Up The Flow, Try And Catch Up To My Speed, I'll Even Write Slow...
- Mc4Eyes? What, Are You Some Kind Of Fucking Fast Food Type Dork?...
Liked it. Good play off his name.
- After This An Air Compressor Couldn't Keep Your Heart Still Pumping...
Nice line.
MC4Eyez
- Here's one true thing, test me, I show you how bitter pain is
- The only way you'd Shock someone is with a finger in her anus
Nice opening! Hahah.. had me laughing.
- Your rhymes are lazy, certainly the work of a slow slob
- The only hard work you've done in your life was a blow job
Another nice punch.
- Testing me was a mistake, and soon you'll see the blunder
- People who read your text become jealous of Stevie Wonder
That's sick.
This battle was pretty tight. Better than anything I've seen yet in VVV. I'm giving this battle to MC4Eyez. He clearly came out with a lot more punches than Tru-$hocka did. Ill shit, kid. You got 30 lines - why not use 'em?
those were some ill lines, especially when they came in the beginning of the verseKids Obsessed With My Text, Stalks Me In School And Takes Notes...
Whats Next? Make Your Own Punctuation Book Just To Create Quotes...
If Hope Floats Then I Take It Your Boat Must Have Sank A While Ago...
Pick Up The Flow, Try And Catch Up To My Speed, I'll Even Write Slow...
those were aiight from mc4eyesI've seen more interesting verses than yours written with just the space bar
Or else you'll be down on you luck like you're sucking Leprechaun dick
overall... i think tru-$hocka came way harder
mc4eyes was aiight in some parts of his rhyme
vote= tru-$hocka
peace
umm i say the same thing they all said tru got this with betta flow punches
my vote goes for tru
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Vote - Mc4EyEz.
Better Verse, Had A Couple Sick Lines. Tru - Nothing Impressed Me Maybe Except That Blow Job Line. I've Seen You Come Harder Then This Man..
[ People who read your text become jealous of Stevie Wonder ]
[ The way you're dreading my presence, it's like you're braiding my Christmas gifts ]
Those Were Nice kid
Props.
vote=mc4eyes
was feelin his flow more, the punches came both ways and the best punch was from tru with the hope floats line but all around gotta give it to mc4
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Tru-$hocka-
You attempted some punchlines but I really didnt feel many of them. You also had some wordplay...You second was the nicest of your verse. Flowde better than your opponent. No multis or inners really...And you only wrote about half of what he did...You rverse had a lot of filler and punches that could have ben reworded...Nothing braggable..
Overall:3.0/10
Mc4Eyez:
Better verse in all categories exceot for flow. Punches were more direct and hit harder...You had better wordplay although it was stretched or played...You put more material down and thats basically what it came down to...
I've seen more interesting verses than yours written with just the space bar
/\ hah...prettynice punchline..
That and sex are the only times this kid could finish first
/\ another good punch...
You had some multis...overall better verse..work on your ocmplexity and flow...
Overall:5.5/10
yo this was a good match, but yo i guess i'll go with mc4eyez.....
yo TRU was stright on his punches i like how ... he clown too,
but i like mc4eyes style more with the word play n its style
vote = mc4eyez
this battle was one of the closest ones i read so far. shocka's word play was tight in spots like the one about house party and kid n' play. but imma go wit mc4 cuz his flow was tighter and his punch lines was harder. holla
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