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[sNoopfox]

Thanks Forshadow.

Myth...I do appreciate your output, and it has challenged me to look deeper into more 'structured' poetry...
But understand, not everyone has the knowledge of what forms the basis of a solidly correctly crafted poem.
Im sure most people who post here don't take into account the number of syllables...bla bla bla etc
I don't know, I'd like to think that anyone can express themselves through poetry without having to conform to a certain ideal of what makes it good, or 'legal' comes to mind.
Either way, id still appreciate furthar feedback on my future drops.

Peace

sNoopfox

[Varentao]

Hmmm, it's interesting. I find that structures do help. But at the same time...one should sometimes find it by themselves. By 'feel'. Rather than count. Though to be fair, it varies on how succesful people are at this. You could be firing blanks from your perpetual pistol of poetry for quite a while...if not forever. So don't make structure baron to ya, as Myth said.

[p O e T i Q u E]

I believe this is a great poem keep up what you are doing i was impressed