A'ight...
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Good Luck. You're gonna need it.
Knoxxious
Melancholy
A'ight...
10 Lines
House Rules
Due in 38 Hours.
Good Luck. You're gonna need it.
~A Veteran From RapVerse. Guess Who I Am?~
A'ight checkin' in this bitch...
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This kid is wack
and that is a fact
He is fat
Wack wack wack....
...Hold up now...that ain' me...
My flow flawless, made this kid Knoxxious feel nauscious...
...My spits make him choke, slit his neck, drip blood down the faucet
This kid's and Aussie, he ain' gotta crew, a kangaroo his posse...
...Admit defeat, I will beseige, you wit my punches you can't stop me
Fuck pot, get speed, in this you need somethin' stronger than weed...
...'Cause when you facin' Meloncholy...you won't achieve victory against me
My punches hit ya like a train, I'm insane in my brain, truly demonic...
...This you can't digest, failed the test, 'cause I chew through ya metabolic
I ain' no herb, a loss is what you deserve, now you feel embarrassed...
...This is lyrical alchemy, my level of skill on a balcony, and your's off the terrace...
~A Veteran From RapVerse. Guess Who I Am?~
Woops, I fucked up there...^^
This kid is wack
and that is a fact
He is fat
Wack wack wack....
...Hold up now...that ain' me...
My flow flawless, made this kid Knoxxious feel nauscious...
...My spits make him choke, slit his neck, drip blood down the faucet
This kid's and Aussie, he ain' gotta crew, a kangaroo his posse...
...Admit defeat, I will beseige, you wit my punches you can't stop me
Fuck pot, get speed, in this you need somethin' stronger than weed...
...'Cause when you facin' Meloncholy...you won't achieve victory against me
My punches hit ya like a train, I'm insane in my brain, truly demonic...
...This you can't digest, failed the test, 'cause I chew through ya metabolic
I ain' no herb, a loss is what you deserve, now you feel embarrassed...
...This is lyrical alchemy, my level of skill on a balcony, and your's off the terrace...
~A Veteran From RapVerse. Guess Who I Am?~
i woulda spat this earlier, but my comp wouldnt go into any sites at all.
I dont know anythin bout this bitch, but ill go from wat i do know.
Yo,Yo, Yo...chek it.
This guys a fukin wack fuk, and his only got a weak 3 posts,
he likes 2 stuff his face wit meat, and it aint his beef roasts,
didnt you read the rules?"no fags that dont kno wat they talkin bout,
cant biff a way out a poofs tea party,grabs 2 by the ass and starts walkin out,
bitch ass muh fucka, you couldnt drop shit if you were a bloated pigeon,
go see one of fukin shrinks, we dont need 2 listen 2 ur noted wingin,
this cat couldnt spit a good rhyme, if he chewed up sum of Big L's lyrics,
says hes a veteran from another website, then again his hes own critics,
your a punk, a fake, i seen more realistic things on micheal jacksons face,
thats low man, have of him is made of rubber, like undercovered batmans cape.
you mite not get the shit bout the rules, but in my thread in bitchslapped one of the rules were no fags that dont know wat they talkin bout.
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fuk melon, ur pretty damn good...wat site did u cum from???
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Uppin
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I came from RapVerse...read my sig...good luck, mayne, thanks for the props, you got potential fo sho. Uppin' for votes.
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uppin2.
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My flow flawless, made this kid Knoxxious feel nauscious...
...My spits make him choke, slit his neck, drip blood down the faucet
-Pretty nice... 7/10
This kid's and Aussie, he ain' gotta crew, a kangaroo his posse...
...Admit defeat, I will beseige, you wit my punches you can't stop me
- Ok punch lil weak but there 5/10
Fuck pot, get speed, in this you need somethin' stronger than weed...
...'Cause when you facin' Meloncholy...you won't achieve victory against me
- ok... 7/10
My punches hit ya like a train, I'm insane in my brain, truly demonic...
...This you can't digest, failed the test, 'cause I chew through ya metabolic
- Just filler 5/10
I ain' no herb, a loss is what you deserve, now you feel embarrassed...
...This is lyrical alchemy, my level of skill on a balcony, and your's off the terrace...
- Very nice Structure. 7/10
Alright I think you can improve in just adding punches and less filler. Structure, flow, and vocab is good..
Your Total 31/50=62%
I wouldn't do that starter or use that huge font again though...
This guys a fukin wack fuk, and his only got a weak 3 posts,
he likes 2 stuff his face wit meat, and it aint his beef roasts,
-Weak opener 4/10
didnt you read the rules?"no fags that dont kno wat they talkin bout,
cant biff a way out a poofs tea party,grabs 2 by the ass and starts walkin out,
-Not too sure about this... 4/10
bitch ass muh fucka, you couldnt drop shit if you were a bloated pigeon,
go see one of fukin shrinks, we dont need 2 listen 2 ur noted wingin,
-Reminded me of a cheap version of Biggies Ryhme of Dropping shit like a Pigeon. Not Cool 3/10
this cat couldnt spit a good rhyme, if he chewed up sum of Big L's lyrics,
says hes a veteran from another website, then again his hes own critics,
- Not bad 6/10
your a punk, a fake, i seen more realistic things on micheal jacksons face,
thats low man, have of him is made of rubber, like undercovered batmans cape.
- I am sorry but I dont think face and cape rhyme unless you have a type of slurr or somthin 4/10
you mite not get the shit bout the rules, but in my thread in bitchslapped one of the rules were no fags that dont know wat they talkin bout.
- Ummm....ZERO.
Your Total is 21/50 = FAIL
You have potential but you need to elevate in every aspect... Ne ways Respecz
Vote=Melancholy
IF I LEAVE FEEDBACK YOU LEAVE FEEDBACK>>>KARMA<<<<
Aight here is a link to my battles versus:
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...:::"Latest Battle":::...
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r u fukin dumb or sumthin, face and cape rhymes, it doesnt hav 2 sound perfect...
and the thing bout my thread in bitchslapped isnt a fukin bar u idiot.
but thanx 4 the vote.
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He didn't even poll....oh well. Uppin' for some more votes.
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Uppin'...this has been fuckin' slept on...
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close battle and was weak in my opinion. u both lacked hard hitting punches i only saw a few decent lines. melancholy came way to selfglorifying and wasnt witty to me yet complex but still he came weak here. knox wasnt selfglorifying and he had some decent lines and his flow was slightly better. very close battle but my vote goes to knox
v/knox
RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY DRYBIRDS BATTLE!!!
THX
word ^ that's exactly what i was thinking. Melancholy had way too much self-glorification in his whole verse. good flow & vocab is worthless without punches & personals. this is an easy vote.. Knoxxious wins this simply for throwing punches & insults... yea..
V/ Knoxxious
Been a real one.
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