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    just rhyming

    "its the wrath of the phantom, the wordsmith champion"
    "i spray similes in the sickest scenes random"
    "molesting metaphors, i message in morse"
    "my methods is morphed as i menace you all"
    "my weapon of course is meddling force"
    "the phantom conjures lords invading ya manor in hordes"
    "im breathing the darkest matter in storms"
    "fragging xenomorphs riding shotgun with E.T."
    "wreake regimes waist deep in debris"
    "espionage in multitudes; i multi-kill multi dudes"
    "with multiple multislugs at differant multitudes"
    "travel ice-dunes whilst i chatter tunes on icicles"
    "i see fools, freeze matter with hyperthermic mind-assaults"
    "i indulge 90 volts into ya eyezone"
    "im dangerous like treading tightrope blindfold"
    "i conquer with concepts containing deep context"
    "consume ya conscience constant; i leave thoughts condensed"
    "assasinate at rapid rates with swords so supreme"
    "i choke worse then bows tied in life-support machines"
    "im hard to follow; like analysing blank maps"
    "its snowball art:"
    "cus once i start rolling its hard to stop this avalance"
    "i make an army of deadly dead freak from cemetries"
    "menacing melodies, i sip the liquor beverage heaviliy"
    "my lingua renders henchmen defenseless with my wizardy;"
    "i spit spiritual decibels"
    "warp spherical incredible mythical miricles"
    "im seven seas, many weak just remain puddles"
    "leave you puzzled like van goghs paintings being juggled"
    "its metaphor terror, capture similes and make em scream"
    "my techniques could houdini locked up in speech"
    "speak octupus tounge, dont get caught in the tenticles"
    "my status is a sick fuck like i was diseased testicles"
    "battle convoys of andriods with analog semi-glocks"
    "many lost, never knew i sparred with the demi-gods"

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    that was a decent thread, i liked the rhyming, personally i liked reading this......but yo if you can hit up my old thread please do so
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156633

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    thanks for the fedback...aight i will check your post...one

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    Very nice drop. Nothing really stood out, but it was still decent. Nice flow. Mind giving feed on my post? It's only a few threads down.

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    This was a good post, u had a lot of tight multis in it and a few good stand out rhymes. my fav was "espionage in multitudes; i multi-kill multi dudes"
    "with multiple multislugs at differant multitudes", that was a hot couple bars. It was tight and overall this was pretty good. i liked it. It had a good flow to it and it was just nice. Keep spittin.

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    Impressive verse lyrically...

    However it was full of self glorification, and personally I find that uninteresting...

    But, The good bits outweighed the bad bits...

    For instance, you had a good grasp of vocab, and utilised your knowledge of it well.

    Nice rhyme scheme, not basic by any means, and also the incorporation of the multis added to this. Impressive.

    I suggest you attempt writing about a concept rather than just rhyming about how good you are... Pick something at random and attempt to provide a comprehensive verbal assualt on it...

    Anyway thats my 2 pence..

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    thanks for the fedback people...and Jai-Cee the reason for the self glorification is this, i used to be on these boards a long time ago and had the name Narcycist....so hence the reason the rhyme was like that...just another persona of my personality....one

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    Yo just like everybody else said it was decent some rhymes were hot and some were not but altogether it was good....i like ya flow and style

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    Shukran duke

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    Exclamation fraud

    “Why do kats keep on biting my shit?”

    THIS IS A REALITY CHECK!! INTERPERSONAL IS A FRAUD FOR THOSE WHO DIDN’T REALIZE YET. FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO LIKED WHAT YOU THOUGHT WAS HIS JOIN THE FORUM ON www.euphrates.ca AND VOICE YOUR OPINIONS TO THE CREW.

    yao interpersonal, what do you mean kats byte your ish, when youre the biggest kat byting, you need to change your nick from interpersonal to imposter, and between me and you, you should be ashamed especially in the hard times narce is going through right now. but you thought you were slick changing your nick on here from narcicyst to interpersonal and putting up new soundclick sites with music that aint yours. well, that just goes to show that this is where youd stay, hiding behind a computer screen typing up someone elses life for kicks, even sick enough to post pictures of the man you wish you were and then not even have the decency to defend "yourself" while they mocked the picture?? you sat back and laughed??
    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular
    he looks like a cheap, spanish snoop dogg wanna be that drinks alot and tries to speak eloquently, but sounds like deeeez
    Quote Originally Posted by Abstract
    looks like andre 3000 fused with an alchoholic spanaird
    Quote Originally Posted by Interpersonal
    ^^hahahahaha...i am an Arab but a lot of arabs look hispanic though
    Then you encourage the download of the album??
    Quote Originally Posted by Mag...
    wait... *does double take*
    you're part of euphrates!!
    fuck... everybody on rb should recognize...
    get at me on aim any time your coming through saskatchewan... I'll hook you up with legitimate and professional promoters in the area...
    Quote Originally Posted by Interpersonal
    ^^thats me rapping on the tracks you dled duke...lol...
    Quote Originally Posted by Interpersonal
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164281

    JEKYLL: What's your s/n on slsk man?

    INTERPERSONAL: its narcel but i dont use it that much...why you want some of my tracks from the new album?????????

    JEKYLL: Yeah, sure, I wanna hear. I gotta go out in a minute though but I'll hit you up later if you're on.

    INTERPERSONAL: word duke...you gonna flip when you hear the track i did with Virtuoso...

    LECHZ : ^He can d/l it from me...jobus did loool

    INTERPERSONAL: ^^hahahaha whats your s/n on soulseek duke?

    Even in arguments you posted narces quotes to elevate your intellect,

    Quote Originally Posted by Vanja
    No Idle ure right...Crooked I > Anonymous
    that was just some up and coming rapper i thought peeps might like
    I like crooked..been liking him since like 2000..he's just very inconssistant.
    and Jekyl...Postman is right..ure a faggot.....and Interpersonal......well ure nobody i dont know u so have fun being butt cowboys with jekyll
    and honestly none of u can argue hip-hop with me.
    Crooked i > 100% of UK hip-hop
    Quote Originally Posted by Interpersonal
    Vanja you couldn't make up for lost time if you covered a misplaced foriegn watch with lipstick and eyeliner...and as far as not being able to argue hip hop with you, i aint down with that wack shit you listen to and pollute your ears with...man is it me or is this forum just getting filled with nonsense and shit talkers like compost salesmen hosting manure conferences???? Vanja i have worked with hip hop artists unlike you...i aint no textcee like yourself...i have two albums that are selling copies...dont know why you getting mad???you came out dissing me first when clearly Jekyll and myself weren't even taking about you...so take it like a man duke with your immature ass...
    What a joke……

    People biggin you up while you act all modest and are probably so lost you forgot who you are.
    How the fuck you gon call yourself interpersonal when you dont even possess a personality dawg???

    For those who are confused, listen to eminems song stan (delavar), I never thought id have to say it but ...

    For proof on this matter since some might not believe, go to the Euphrates forum and simply ask…

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