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Thread: Lately

  1. #1
    DECA
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    Lately

    Lately
    theres been one thing on my mind
    one thing on my mind and its one of a kind
    the aching thorns in my eyes have left me blind
    but i still can think and share whats mine
    theres nothing i can do if u leave whats mine astray
    cuz in this life theres no time for delays
    i can feel my hearts movement
    and its coming your way searching for improvement
    i feel the breeze of your soul dogding
    i may have missed but i land on hands that r prepared for massaging
    which i need indeed
    off of love my heart feeds
    and continues to grow like a seed
    but i will not stop and plead
    cuz everyone has a choice
    you can go ahead and walk away from that calling voice
    but soon you'll regret
    that you tryed to forget
    its blood that i sweat
    from these gouging wounds that you u left
    which have now become memories
    i can careless of what you think of me
    cuz you've made me stronger
    theres no place in my heart for u any longer
    so now im the one turning my back
    i wont turn back around not even to see how u react
    cuz i dont care
    you've lost me and your not even aware
    im floating
    the hands have released and stoped the choking
    to set me free
    far away is where i want to be
    cuz its my life
    and lately thats what i've been thinking about day and night...

  2. #2
    shit whats up DirtBoy69's Avatar
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    rhyming was kinda simple but the emotion was good and it flowed well
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  3. #3
    monkeypoet
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    aweosme peice..... simple yet complex at the same time... the flow was awesome and the vocab was good, and emotions were deep and tru.... fave lines:

    but soon you'll regret
    that you tryed to forget
    its blood that i sweat
    from these gouging wounds that you u left

    keep it flowiN!


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    yo iight drop! kinda complex but good thought. really nice flow

    keepit up

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    DECA
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