its whateva...

[RhymeSosweet]

since i dont like this site because of a couple niggas who need major manners i decided to be the bigger person and leave but before i go im gonna leave them with a small parting gift:

this is for my niggas mike and axl stay pussy as useual

I got the the flow to penitrate ur text
mutilate ur body like t-rex
im the wild one stop me when im done
cuz my flow is too hot make both these niggas come
let me tell u a story
of how ill murder a niggas rymes in glory
first ill maim a lame
then rile his style
then kill his skills
and after all that i'll leave him an intense concequence
MY LYRICS AINT BAD I SIPT A WILD DEFENSE
u NIGGAs HAVE NO SENSE
GOT SO MANY PROBLEMS yall NEED A HOLY RINSE
Im bout to leave cuz yall niggaz aint about nothin
all that come out ya mouth is a bunch of sin
so im out and yall betta get yall sleep real quick
cuz lata u gotta report to ya job of lickin my click

damn i thought this would be a coo site..oh well fuck yall im out oh yea and that was some childish shit yall put under my sn..but aight.. 1

[RhymeSosweet]

aight i jus notice you chaged that shit off my sn so its respect for the admin mike altho he did dis me on my other thread i aint trippin cuz i dont sweat tha small shit i was only trippin on tha sn but its changed so its peace but as for that nigga axl fuck u like i said above...and for everybody else holla at gurl

[Mr. Key]

Jus to let u kno ma, "Break in my anus" is what everyone starts out with, u dont get to pick what u get till u get to 500 posts, then until u get 100 itll say hi there im new, after 100 u'll be a fly weight, 200-400 is a light weight 400-500 is a middle weight then after that u get to change it

Ur verse was ok, u gotta work on having punchlines, similes metaphors, and multies. But this site is cool mike and axl are admins of the site... basically meaniin they do what they want and say what they want, there are alot of assholes on this site but, dont let that discourage u, jus concentrate on gettin better, and let ur opinions be known, no matter what people say 1

[RhymeSosweet]

thanks but that wasnt the only thing i was trippin off of that nigga mike said a evil comment toward me and i came to the site tryin to keep peace so i had to get at him...but u right shit i dont care anymore and thanks for the feedbac im a beginner so i try but i really do poetry ya kno but thanks again stay pimped and holla at ya gurl

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, thanks.

[GaWdZ ArTisT]

damn, thats wuz a pretty good drop, yo.... it do need some work but other than that keep up the good work.... also dont leave becuz of ppl talkin shyt, jus do yo thang.... dont trip off the next man, holla.......