Words Worth..

[Foreshadow]

As the glue mends contless wounds together
Life comes as a blessing that one shall cherish forever
Even when life may give up and fail in the end
You should give thanks for the opportunity I recommend

Life, So bland and hopeless although humans remain thoughtful
Blaming someone for your blunder by saying gods awful
Respect is given when the appropiate time is bestowed
He has given you every right to live and nothing should be owed

Political preaching you should find truth in every proceeding
Look for the contrast behind the meaning when poetically meeting
Express the feeling and let others feel your pain through emotional reading
Bind two souls successively by god or a basic word worth believing

A holy moment worth ceasing or any moment for that matter
I would rather love and be loved then confront disaster
What Im saying is give thanks and cherish every breath as if your last
Please take chances in life so you dont die regretting the past

[Laureate]

nice drop here Foreshadow

I like the 4 line rhyme scheme..thought you did it well...the message of your piece was good...and your words fit well togeter...only thing was that I think in some lines, you should have put commas, to help the flow...but maybe you didn't need them, and it might have messed up your piece cause you didn't use commas at all...I'm rambling now...nice piece..keep it up...good to see you back

[Foreshadow]

Thanks Lyric.

[Sublime D]

this was exceptional....your Christ centered poetry is always appreciated....it's refreshing....this had a good flow...good structure...good content...eevrythign was good..ntohign was slacking....props...

8.8/10

[Foreshadow]

Thanks Sublime.

[Sublime D]

you need to join divine diction...we just added nottybabe

[Foreshadow]

Naw Im with euth but thanks anyway.

[Sublime D]

i know ur with them...but...you need to be with us lol...as a matter of fact..is euthanasia a noobie or established crew

[Foreshadow]

We'll be established in a couple of weeks. ight no more chit chat pm me or something uppin.

[.:GoldPlated:.]

I like this verse mainly the last few bars, u used the right
words to express true meanings, all round nice vese.

A holy moment worth ceasing or any moment for that matter
I would rather love and be loved then confront disaster

Nice drop.

[Prince Escobar]

your subtle multies were the biggest credit to this joint, flow used perfectly, incredible elevation, you got my vote for this month's awards, great piece overall, check you pm's you pie faced pig port-a-potty good job, 1luv.

[Foreshadow]

Thanks Gold & Da NFamous.

[shawty"B"]

i liked this peice a lot. i think that you did a realy nice job with this. The topic was definatly different. and the emotion in this was definatly here, the is truely evidant. Great Job!

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A holy moment worth ceasing or any moment for that matter
I would rather love and be loved then confront disaster
What Im saying is give thanks and cherish every breath as if your last
Please take chances in life so you dont die regretting the past

^awsome. Simply true and awsome

keep droppin
thanks for that reply

....bless

[Foreshadow]

Thanks Shawty.