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    New..."Escape To Reality"...New

    Damn, its been a while, and this is the first beat I made for a while...

    No samples used on this, and its my first beat using FL, so I'm still getting used to things...

    Gimme some feedback though folks...

    Escape to Reality

    The link is in my sig...

    -Rex

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    ait im clickin... let's see what happens

    the rhodes sounds ass, like WHOA EQ that first thing before you do anything...
    the melody is ait, nothing special... i can see the vibe you were going with, but this is where you add another instrument or FX to give it that abstract feel, the snare is ait it needs to be thicker though... the kick you used is no where to be found, i can BARELY hear it at all. you need to learn to compress and mix better

    not bad, but not good this is more like a skeleton to me, so build from this

    pz

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    New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz

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    indeed..... i hate the melody though

    ...... and u kno wi don usually hat eur work..... but this sounds terrible

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    Well thanks for the feedback guys, I guess I need more work with FL...

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    Hmm......

    I can't stand that repetitive dark noise that is making the melody, and it is WAY too loud.......I agree with Emerge on the skeleton part of the beat, but you gotta get rid of that melody.........change it up, throw some more instruments in there an what not.....the drum track is aight

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    hmmmmmmmmm you said your first beat
    irs okay but melody im not feelin

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