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Thread: BTK Vs Scriptious

  1. #1
    Scriptious
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    BTK Vs Scriptious

    Normal rules..

    30 mins from now..

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    Aight...

    G'luck.

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    Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
    Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
    Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
    Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
    You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
    S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
    And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
    But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
    Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
    Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
    When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
    That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!

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    Scriptious
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    sorry for dropping later..explorer kept shutting down..

    Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
    ..like grown men groping over babies bits..
    ..then sticking there fingers in
    Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
    ..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
    ..id quote mainly on your spits
    BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
    ..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
    ..then kept hostage in a igloo
    You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
    ..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
    ..cause im leaving you blown
    Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
    ..so how could you make a big come back..
    ..where I now end your cause

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    Bump!

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    Scriptious
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    Up..up..and away #1

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    Quote Originally Posted by Born To Kill
    Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
    Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
    Good wit....decent punch....good metaphor.....6/10
    Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
    Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
    A bit weaker than the last....old concept...attempted flip....4/10
    You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
    S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
    Decent personal...coulda been put to use better....5/10
    And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
    But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
    Good metaphor....ok punch...not too hard....4/10
    Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
    Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
    ...Decent once again...almost lost me...but good punch...6/10
    When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
    That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
    Another decent one...ok closer...not too shabby....4/10
    Born To Kill's Verse: 29/60


    Quote Originally Posted by Scriptious
    Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
    ..like grown men groping over babies bits..
    ..then sticking there fingers in
    ...Ehh...decent metaphor....weak punch....3/10
    Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
    ..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
    ..id quote mainly on your spits
    Decent punch....not bad..not great...4/10
    BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
    ..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
    ..then kept hostage in a igloo
    ...Is it me or are you not rhyming?? ..oh well..lol...good meta. bad punch....3/10
    You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
    ..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
    ..cause im leaving you blown
    Decent actually...not bad...ok punch...ok metaphor....5/10
    Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
    ..so how could you make a big come back..
    ..where I now end your cause
    Weak closing....not much of a punch....3/10
    Scriptious' Verse: 18/60


    Vote - Born To Kill
    Reasons:
    Scriptious' structure almost completely lost me...you had good attempts at punches...but you just couldnt pull through on making harder hits....

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    structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice metas...wordplay is nice...all ur punches connected...they were witty too...personals were good...werd...

    Scriptious
    what is up with ur structure man?....that shit is confusing...i thought the flow fell off, but it may just be me cause i never caught on to ur structure...u had some good metas as well...wordplay was ok...like, 1 of ur punches connected good...the rest either barely connected, or didnt at all...no good personals...

    Overall
    both had some nice metas...Born To Kill had the better structure...as well as the better flow in my eyes...he had better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Born To Kill gets my vote...

    VOTE - BORN TO KILL

    PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

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    BTK-
    Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
    Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
    Pretty good....7/10
    Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
    Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
    Played.......5/10
    You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
    S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
    Decent- 5/10
    And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
    But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
    Wasent really feeling this one 4/10
    Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
    Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
    Ok punch too much to be assumed 4/10
    When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
    That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
    Pretty good 5/10

    OVERALL-30


    Srip-

    Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
    ..like grown men groping over babies bits..
    ..then sticking there fingers in
    weak...2/10
    Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
    ..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
    ..id quote mainly on your spits
    weak... 3/10
    BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
    ..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
    ..then kept hostage in a igloo
    weak... 2/10
    You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
    ..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
    ..cause im leaving you blown
    Pretty good....6/10
    Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
    ..so how could you make a big come back..
    ..where I now end your cause
    And weak-2/10

    OVERALL-15

    BTK takes this.... Really one sided
    Scrip, work on that structure. It would have killed even a great punch.
    The leaving you blown line was pretty good. If would have came with more shit like that it would have been alot closer.

  10. #10
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    B2K:
    Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
    Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
    8/10... good opener
    Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
    Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
    7.5/10... lol, good wordplay!
    You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
    S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
    8/10... strong hit.
    And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
    But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
    5/10... bleh. not good; not a punch.
    Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
    Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
    8.5/10... great!
    When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
    That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
    6/10... good wordplay. but a weak punch.

    overall- 43/60
    difference= 17

    Scriptious:
    Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
    ..like grown men groping over babies bits..
    ..then sticking there fingers in
    6/10... nice, but it looks like you're dissin yaself...?
    Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
    ..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
    ..id quote mainly on your spits
    8.5/10.... now that shit was raw!
    BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
    ..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
    ..then kept hostage in a igloo
    7/10... lol, nice meta.
    You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
    ..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
    ..cause im leaving you blown
    5/10... um... where's the punch???
    Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
    ..so how could you make a big come back..
    ..where I now end your cause
    3/10... it doesn't rhyme. isn't this a RAP battle???

    overall- 29.5/50
    difference= 20.5

    vote-B2K for the better punches and wordplay. (the #s show he had the bigger percentage)

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    Come on, peeps...

    One more.

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    Bump...

    Please...

    Pretty fuckin please...

    With sugar and a fuckin cherry on top...

    Someone close this!

    Peace

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    Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
    Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
    7/10...ok opener/personal
    Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
    Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
    5/10...ehhh
    You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
    S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
    6/10...nice personal
    And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
    But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
    7/10...good punch
    Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
    Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
    4/10...weak
    When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
    That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
    5/10......ummmmm, doesnt make sense...if he sucked then he wouldnt be a virgin......deducted
    overall - 6.8...u had punches but some didnt hit hard at all...but the personals were good overall...


    scriptious
    Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
    ..like grown men groping over babies bits..
    ..then sticking there fingers in
    3/10...wack
    Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
    ..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
    ..id quote mainly on your spits
    6/10...alright
    BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
    ..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
    ..then kept hostage in a igloo
    5/10...would be nice...if the third line rhymed
    You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
    ..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
    ..cause im leaving you blown
    4/10...weak personal
    Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
    ..so how could you make a big come back..
    ..where I now end your cause
    2/10....pffft!!!
    overall - 4....u should focus more on makin better punches, than flow, the punches were weak, so were the personals..
    v/BTK....can yall return the favor plz...link in sig

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