10 Lines..Gimmick Battle..
Must have a Movie Title in each line..
Due in an hour or D/Q..
Check in..count this as mine..
10 Lines..Gimmick Battle..
Must have a Movie Title in each line..
Due in an hour or D/Q..
Check in..count this as mine..
Check in then.....................................
good luck yo let me talk to you
So i guess im spitting verse this mc needs help he cant get a girl
so like scenes in american pie he always feeling himself
i bag his exgirl got her trained she always hop say something in my face
you get cut wit more razors than barbershop
i call you a trick a slot a bicth and a ho in this battle i crack more jokes than the chapelle show in this battle you always fall and ask your mom about me cause she likes my monster balls you's a prick call you alot of names your father ashamed of you thats why he calls you a dick got a little pee pee thats why you dress up like woman like white chicks
dont even got to read your raps i know they a wreck even if you bag a girl they proably look like shrek.
holla thats all that can come out my head right now holla back one may the bets man win
holla please vote holla tell me how yalll liked it after scriptuios flows
This is your Final Destination, as my Deep Impact tears into you..
..so we’ll see whos the Lord Of The Ring..
..when I now impute through
Somethings Gotta Give, and that thing is me winning with ease..
..cause my hits have now Stuck On You..
..to start ripping yah knees
Its like the Dawn Of The Dead, as your now exposed to rot firm..
..where ive left you Against The Ropes..
..so take it, You Got Served
I beat down on most, so just keep in mind, you’ll Never Die Alone..
..cause your competing with The Punisher!..
..as im Taking Lives from notes
Im a Godsend plummeting down Miracles! now your in new sorrows..
..as your existence is unstable, where your hit..
..towards The Day After Tomorrow
Lets get these votes rolling in then....
good battle playa voters vote on your favorite holla
expose man ur lyrics kinda lack in a such way 2 only call shite, dawg u need 2 work on ur spits man sorry dawg but my vote goes 2 the winner Scriptious he had better lines and his spits were fast and not as boring, pretty good 4 a newbie. Scriptious u fink u can beat the best then take me ill battle ur ass down fool. stil u get my vote dawg
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We'll see fretman..cheers for the vote..Uppin...#1
Uppin for more votes..when i reach the post limit i'll return the favour..#2
What do i have to do to get some votes..when i reach 100 posts i'll return the favour..Uppin #3
Scriptious took this...n it really wasn't that hard of a decision
Expose's verse was piss poor..structured like a run on sentence
his spit was just down right ugly...n fact it's easier to think of
the things he did wrong than the things he did right...but first
and fore most he didn't stick to the theme of this battle..he did
mention a few movies but they were just thrown into wack sex
punches...not to mention he obviously lacked creativity, talking
about Script's girl, his ex-girl, and how he cant get a girl..n others
words he's a repetitve fuck...his punches..oh wait he didnt have any
congrats duke yer shit was pure fill and bad fill at that...i'd say the only
plus to his verse was when he said script's mom likes his monster
balls...well yea it sucked but it made me chuckle...
Script's verse on the other hand was decent...coming more creative
by far with his use of movie titles..plus he actually dropped one
every line adhering to the rules posted...punch wise he didn't have
anything special but i didnt really matter because compared to expose's
they were dope..the presentation was also obviously better, basically
it was readable..i wasn't really feeling the split up lines but meh
it's okay i guess..regardless
v/ Script..even though he used impute in the wrong context
...
Thanks for taking your time to vote adamant..appreciated greatly..Uppin for more votes..#4
scriptious-
This is your Final Destination, as my Deep Impact tears into you..
..so we’ll see whos the Lord Of The Ring..
..when I now impute through
my bad i didnt mean to post that
scriptious-
This is your Final Destination, as my Deep Impact tears into you..
..so we’ll see whos the Lord Of The Ring..
..when I now impute through
wack opener. lord of the rings. that was a waste use of a movie title.4/10
Somethings Gotta Give, and that thing is me winning with ease..
..cause my hits have now Stuck On You..
..to start ripping yah knees
ur using the movie titles in the shityist ways 2/10
Its like the Dawn Of The Dead, as your now exposed to rot firm..
..where ive left you Against The Ropes..
..so take it, You Got Served
wack, wack, wack 6/10, even tho this was the worst one yet, u used u got served
I beat down on most, so just keep in mind, you’ll Never Die Alone..
..cause your competing with The Punisher!..
..as im Taking Lives from notes
this is a wack punch. it doesnt hit at all2/10
Im a Godsend plummeting down Miracles! now your in new sorrows..
..as your existence is unstable, where your hit..
..towards The Day After Tomorrow
this ending was terrible, 1/10
overall there was no hard punches, i know its hard using movie titles, but this was wack. NOOO punches 15/50
Expose-So i guess im spitting verse this mc needs help he cant get a girl
so like scenes in american pie he always feeling himself
not a very good opener but a harder punch 4/10
i bag his exgirl got her trained she always hop say something in my face
you get cut wit more razors than barbershop
pretty wack 3/10
i call you a trick a slot a bicth and a ho in this battle i crack more jokes than the chapelle show in this battle you always fall and ask your mom about me cause she likes my monster balls you's a prick call you alot of
weak punch 3/10
names your father ashamed of you thats why he calls you a dick got a little pee pee thats why you dress up like woman like white chicks
terrible but its a punch 3/10
dont even got to read your raps i know they a wreck even if you bag a girl they proably look like shrek.
weak ending 4/10
overall: u actually had some punches, they hit harder thanscriptious so...
Vote:Expose
return the vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134559
How can you say he won you herb..seriously..why hate vote..stupid herb....2-0 still..i think mods would agree
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