10-12 lines
you spit first
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no hater vote
No time limit
no feedin
G'Luck you'll need it dawg
10-12 lines
you spit first
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no hater vote
No time limit
no feedin
G'Luck you'll need it dawg
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Lyrical Theft: Ralkavelli(5-0), STUBBY(5-1)
This guy answered my call out like 2 min. after it was posted
I hate for you to be the next lil mob that i make become roasted
Look at this fool thinkin he can win, he must be blinded by the fog
He sets this shit up and says [QUOTE]G'Luck you'll need it dawg[/QUOTE
I said that i didnt want a newbie, and you said "were on the same level"
You will be my eleventh win man, will you watch me recieve me medal
I am sorry about this verse man, i know its already makin your ass sob
But enjoy it as your first loss man, and remember it was Stubby Vs. Lil Mob
Well i guess its time to end this shit since it is time for my ass to go
Damn look at the time it took 7 minutes to drop this fuckin flow
not mt best but hopefully good enough
Like “fruity pebble” he’s just as colorful just look at his sig (1)
..Looks like you have a tremendous eating disorder..
just remember vomitin wont get you “sick” (2)
This aint dodgeball just remember your not able to dodge a “hit” (3)
..Don’t try diein like if you was a soldier..
your just a kid, thats full of shit (4)
Every day you remind me of a kid that use to eat twice his weight (5)
..U think ur gonna win but its like a twist in life..
it’s your destiny but I arrange ya fate (6)
Since when you became the king of RB your just gonna get merked (7)
..Sorry but this is gonna be your tenth lost celebrate..
cuz this to me aint work (8)
Sorry to say but your not on my level, I’m just on the next (9)
..I will eat ya mom out..
like a carnivore, t-rex (10)
I pointed out the lines by number incase you cant understand my structure
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Lyrical Theft: Ralkavelli(5-0), STUBBY(5-1)
OMFG!!!!! WHAT WAS THAT SHIT!!!!
THE WINNER IS STUBBY!!
Stubby: You did crap. IT was all right in some spots.... A Lot to fix, is multies, and personals....i think that should do you pretty nice, if you fix those.
Lil mob: Gangster wannabe...doesnt work....and NEITHER DOES YOUR RHYME!!!!!
#1 Flow WAS FUCKED UP
#2 You cant even rhyme.
#3 None of it made sense.....dont explain your lines.....thats gay, and screws up everything
#4. Quit rap. It will never work...
Fix everything in your style, and come back in a few years, when you have hair on ya balls.
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Contrary to what you may think:
You are NOT a good rapper.
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wat didnt rhyme lol tell me kid i even pointed the lines out wow uppin #1
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Lyrical Theft: Ralkavelli(5-0), STUBBY(5-1)
Like “fruity pebble” he’s just as colorful just look at his sig
Looks like you have a eating disorder just remember vomitin wont get you “sick
This aint dodgeball just remember your not able to dodge a “hit”
Don’t try diein like if you was a soldier your just a kid, thats full of shit
Every day you remind me of a kid that use to eat twice his weight
U think ur gonna win but its like a twist in life it’s your destiny but I arrange ya fate
Since when you became the king of RB your just gonna get merked
Sorry but this is gonna be your tenth lost celebrate cuz this to me aint work
Sorry to say but your not on my level, I’m just on the next
..I will eat ya mom out like a carnivore, t-rex
so you can understand it
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Lyrical Theft: Ralkavelli(5-0), STUBBY(5-1)
i think my vote goes to lil mob. it was goin to stubby first but after lil mob cleaned it up it sounds better. His rhymes were much better. Stubbys kinda sounded elementary. lil mobs flow also was betta second time around.
thnx uppin #3 I cleaned it up so ppl could actually understand me ya know
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Lyrical Theft: Ralkavelli(5-0), STUBBY(5-1)
heya..
Stubby...
This guy answered my call out like 2 min. after it was posted
I hate for you to be the next lil mob that i make become roasted
sorta lame.. elementary..
Look at this fool thinkin he can win, he must be blinded by the fog
He sets this shit up and says[QUOTE]G'Luck you'll need it dawg[/QUOTE
you fucked the quote up :P.. pretty weak punch though.
I said that i didnt want a newbie, and you said "were on the same level"
You will be my eleventh win man, will you watch me recieve me medal
urgh.. lame
I am sorry about this verse man, i know its already makin your ass sob
But enjoy it as your first loss man, and remember it was Stubby Vs. Lil Mob
pretty lame..
Well i guess its time to end this shit since it is time for my ass to go
Damn look at the time it took 7 minutes to drop this fuckin flow
horrible finisher
Stubby half of that was filler dude, come up with some nice punches...
Mobb...
Like “fruity pebble” he’s just as colorful just look at his sig
Looks like you have a eating disorder just remember vomitin wont get you “sick
sorta average opener.. weak punch..
This aint dodgeball just remember your not able to dodge a “hit”
Don’t try diein like if you was a soldier your just a kid, thats full of shit
pretty lame.. weak punch
Every day you remind me of a kid that use to eat twice his weight
U think ur gonna win but its like a twist in life it’s your destiny but I arrange ya fate
pretty lame...
Since when you became the king of RB your just gonna get merked
Sorry but this is gonna be your tenth lost celebrate cuz this to me aint work
average
Sorry to say but your not on my level, I’m just on the next
..I will eat ya mom out like a carnivore, t-rex
[b]gay finisher...
I dunno... both were pretty whack... but stubby's finisher really turned me off his verse.... both verse's had filler.. but i think Mobb had less, and attemped good punches...
so...
v/Mobb
I cant vote but ill drop my opinion
Both came weak
Stubby- you came with pretty good structure but too weak of material
I know you are better than what you brought, you should of took more time, and just beat him, punches just didnt hit him hard enough
Lil Mob- you came the opposite, you had poor structure, your material was weak but better than what stubby brung. Work on your structure.
Just for better punches I'd vote for Lil mob
STUBBY
structure was pretty good...flow was also pretty good...no metas...wordplay was simple, wack, and most of it was played...maybe a few of ur punches barely connected...attempted personal...turned out wack...
lil mobster
structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...no metas...wordplay was ok...a few of ur punches connected...attempted personal...didnt really connect....
Overall
both had a pretty good structure, as well as a pretty good flow...both attempted some personals, but neither of theres connected...neither had metas...lil mobster had better wordplay, as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...lil mobster gets my vote...
VOTE - LIL MOBSTER
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both were weak ive herd better from newbies stubby
my vote goes to lil mobi dont know wat else to say
man guys come on read carefully there is not way that i should be losin this battle
dude i so think that i did alot better then yall say tha i did, can we get some better voters in here please uppin 2
well I had some punches and they are sayin it was betta so you have to wait and see who wins and yo everyone I cleaned up my verse so you can understand it look at the 6th post uppin #4
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Lyrical Theft: Ralkavelli(5-0), STUBBY(5-1)
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