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  • fatboyjoe

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  • Scriptious

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Thread: Scriptious Vs fatboyjoe

  1. #16
    TomER
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    yeah it did rhyme u piece of shit /you-jew / good-hood/ wack -pack /all rhyming words u dumb fuk unless u think menace rhymes with trouble which from seein yer raps u prob do

  2. #17
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    Scrptious got this rather easily.

    He has better punches. Perosnals were ok. Just work on those.
    Flow was good and the structrue was good. Opener was wack,
    Only becasue it was a sex line and those are wack. Closer was
    good and it helped you. Good verse

    Fatboy was bad. Not bad for a newb but you have to elevate
    and get better. Read othger battles to get the hang of things
    and use them to your advantage. You have to have punches
    Flow was good and so was structrue but there were no punches

    v/Scrpt

  3. #18
    fatboyjoe
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    uppin #2............................................

  4. #19
    fatboyjoe
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    eclipse thanks for the info........................

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    ill battle anyone of yall holla i make the rules holla

  6. #21
    Ef tha Beef
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    fat boy won cuz Scrptious didnt even fuckin ryme and that is sad, i think Fatboy is good and he should win

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    yo stop votin for yourself damn just look at the 11th and 14th post in my battle between himn fat shit keeps on switchin computers to vote for himelf http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1501471 lol your dqed and banned punk

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  8. #23
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    Blah at this battle. One sided like fuck yo. Scriptious came with good punches, and they fucked Fat Joe up.

    Fat Joe, you should stick to suckin' Ashanti's nipples and ridin' Ja Rule's dick yo.

    Scriptious came with a good verse. Not anything "WHOA". Anyhoo, he had a few good punches, flow was almost perfect. Structure was great too. Overall, I liked his verse. It was decent.

    Fatboyjoe was just wack. He came totally wack. Didn't like anything in his verse. Flow was wack. Structure were wack. Lyrical content was wack. Need I say more? No punches, nothing. You gotta elevate yo.

    Overall - Scriptious obviously took this coz he had a much better verse.

    V/S

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    lmao clearly a blowout....

    you have no sort of structure.......
    your lines are horrible..
    id rather castrate myself with a rusty needle then to read ur horrible peice of shit u call a verse.....
    anytime you think of droppin a verse....
    dont....just...dont
    obviously

    v/script
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  10. #25
    fatboyjoe
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    my last up(5)........................................

  11. #26
    Scriptious
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    Your 3rd actually..and this is not me uppin this as its up the top already..just stating he has 2 more for this..

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    its funny how u all get so mad about typing a poem about some one u dont even see this is not a battle this is just 2 people writting a poem about each other. HAHAHAHAHA. U ALL WOULD GET KILLED IF U REALLY BATTLE SOMEONE.

  13. #28
    Scriptious
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    Go suck a dick and stop freeposting in my thread..like ive said..you wouldnt flow over a wave kid

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    what the hell "you wouldnt flow over a wave kid" hahahahaha yeah your good

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    Wow tomer is an idiot..........now im gunna vote

    Fat BJ analysis: First and foremost, dont say hes getting DR votes. Just because the votes aren't for you, doesnt mean they are DR. Now that I got that off my chest, your verse wasnt good at all. Your flow and structure were horrible, lines varied greatly. Punches and personals were nowhere to be found. Creativity was nonexistant with lines rhyming sea and be. Overall, just elevate.

    Script Analysis: Pretty good verse man, I liked the creative structure and the flow was good. The fact that you actually had punches won that one for you, and most hit. Good on creativity too, your ideas were mostly new and not played. Good verse overall, you took this EASILY

    V/ Scriptous
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