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  • Apocalypse

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  • fatboyjoe

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Thread: Fatboyjoe vs. Apocalypse

  1. #1
    fatboyjoe
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    Fatboyjoe vs. Apocalypse

    ill go 1st

    10-14 lines
    no bitin
    no hate
    no FEEDIN

  2. #2
    fatboyjoe
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    i'll get this started..............................

  3. #3
    ...Apocalypse...
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    u did it wrong damn do it again but go under where it says slaughter this mc

  4. #4
    fatboyjoe
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    YO bitch why u make me go first
    cuz yo ugly ass cant spit a verse
    yo man check it out fucker u cant beat me thats it
    then you'll go home and suck yo momma's dick
    im tired of these wack rappers and all this lyrical shit
    i'll shoot yo ass like Devil May Cry
    cuz i wish yo ass would fuckin die
    i spit my rymes first im tryin to be nice
    u best start gettin lessons from VANILLA ICE
    tryin to challenge me u got alotta nerve
    this ryhmes done u just got served

  5. #5
    fatboyjoe
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    we did that homy ,.....spit yer verse.............................

  6. #6
    ...Apocalypse...
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    Now listen and quick ya bitchin...
    Your verse isn't good so quick ya wishin...
    Everyday you be wishin in my position....
    ya be one of my killin witness....
    Now you have to go to confess....
    That Im the best and I'll make a hole in ya chest....
    Now the verse I spit gives you a curse...
    While your last Im first, call you the worst...
    Now like big pun I'll give you a heart attack...
    Dont need a string ass combat...

  7. #7
    fatboyjoe
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    u suck ............................now lets see our votes

  8. #8
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    hahaha i beat u in both of them u suck y dont u shut the fuck up

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  9. #9
    3-6Neilson
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    Not enough posts so i cant vote, but ill drop my opinion............
    Overall, this was a horribly weak battle
    Fatboyjoe:
    YO bitch why u make me go first
    cuz yo ugly ass cant spit a verse
    -weak opener
    yo man check it out fucker u cant beat me thats it
    then you'll go home and suck yo momma's dick
    im tired of these wack rappers and all this lyrical shit
    -LAME, cant beat me thats it, suck yo mommas dick, is this elemtary school?
    i'll shoot yo ass like Devil May Cry
    cuz i wish yo ass would fuckin die
    -Weak, weak
    i spit my rymes first im tryin to be nice
    u best start gettin lessons from VANILLA ICE
    -vanilla ice thing was really really weak put at least its some kind of punch
    tryin to challenge me u got alotta nerve
    this ryhmes done u just got served
    -again this is weak, but probably your best line in your whole rap
    work on your vocab, it just sounds way too elementary and it gets annoyingm, i think your biggest word in the whole thing was "lyrical" or "vanilla", gotta come stronger
    Apocalypse:
    Now listen and quick ya bitchin...
    Your verse isn't good so quick ya wishin...
    Everyday you be wishin in my position....
    -quick ya bitchin/wishin...do you mean quit?
    ya be one of my killin witness....
    Now you have to go to confess....
    That Im the best and I'll make a hole in ya chest....
    -check ya rhyming, i know all three of these rhymes dont mesh well
    Now the verse I spit gives you a curse...
    While your last Im first, call you the worst...
    -weak, but rhymed, a punch but very weak
    Now like big pun I'll give you a heart attack...
    Dont need a string ass combat...
    -Big pun line made sense, but string ass combat???? dont get...
    Work on making sure most of your stuff rhymes

    This battle was just plain trash, no good punches, not very good vocab and no personals from the both of you, but in the end i would have to say apocalypse won.
    Just because his lyrical vocab was a step above the elementary stuff that fatboyjoe brung which made it a little more interesting to read, like i said this battle was horrible but id try to point out what to work on, both of you need to get some personals in there, come up with some punches, and step up your vocab.
    Good luck to both of you

  10. #10
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    i think both came pretty poorly but
    apocalypse had better vocab and better punches
    fatboy you jsut cant get away with vanilla ive ligns anymore there so played that its useless. pretty much all your lines were played.
    apoc: you have to work on your flow and throw in some multis.
    both of you should think about using smarter verse with wit and wordplay because it adds alot to anything.
    apoc at least tried to go to a higher level with " the big pun " haert attack line thougb it didnt hit that hard.

    v/apocalypse

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  11. #11
    fatboyjoe
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    lil mob........................shut the fuck up bitch!

  12. #12
    fatboyjoe
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    ok uppin this we need to gert this poll closed.......

  13. #13
    fatboyjoe
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    vote on this pleese........ uppin..........................

  14. #14
    Ef tha Beef
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    I cant vote yet,but i think that Fatboy won this one by a long shot cuz Apoc kept puting Quick what the hell was that suppose to mean? i dont know and plus Fatboy was more creative then Apoc put this Now listen and quick ya bitchin...
    Your verse isn't good so quick ya wishin.... that was bad really bad that was retarded and plus again he put QUICK! what the fuck was that suppose to mean and Fatboy didnt spell any thang wrong and his flowed better like this ...i spit my rymes first im tryin to be nice
    u best start gettin lessons from VANILLA ICE
    tryin to challenge me u got alotta nerve
    this ryhmes done u just got served see that is creative and that is what i think and i wish i could vote cuz FatboyJoe won this one.

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    lol you just voted for your self lol IP: 226C 3D3D
    look at the 11th post and look at the last he changes computer so he ownt get caught but he just did

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