"Two faced"

[Talksick]

Flow, vocab, ideas, and structure was all tight.. This was a nice piece.. Coulda added some nice multies to make it next to perfect but uhh, nun the less, it was an enjoyable read, and keep up..

7.5/10

[Die_verse]

liked this piece alot...i like the direction u went with this piece and the poetry aspect u used in your writing...different flava than u usually see

First two verses were dope and then fell off at the end

Great vocab, made it an easy read breaking it up like that...flow was on point cept may have fallen off a little at the end buh still fiya nonetheless