Read the rules.
Verses due by Saturday 12 PM Eastern!!!
Check ins are due Thursday 12 PM Eastern!!!. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Checkin in.....14 okay???
sounds fine to me
Quit rapping, It's leading you nowhere, You won't get signed..
Unless Interscope Records lost their lenses and happens to be blind,
You'll come up in the Lost & Found, I jacked your backround..
& without that your dr's are gone, And facing me, Your in shit clown,
Wreck this fake, I'ma haul you out of RB and back into place..
Along with patients on the psych unit, Cuz both of you are wastes,
Flaunt your shit like you're actually on the And1mix tape tour..
N' Thrust's going on streaks, So your left cleaning up the floor,
Damn kid you're games poor, You work hard but don't cash in..
You'll never be worth value, Even if you struck the talent you're lakin'
His Text will hide clout, Rip your abdomen and turn Your Chest inside out...
And where did Fah Q's Journey begin,from his Dick to Aisle's Mouth...
Don't talk stupid, stop screaming at bars...
You may not be wack, but with ur verse's, we're believeing u are...
You better fuck Off kid, I'm easily Dropping your roster...
Battle wit me, fuck up Fah insanely more than horny Psychologist Doctors...
Impossible like hell freezin over, u cant beat me by skills...
So you go and look for luck by searching for a Four-Leaf-Clover...
This battles over, what shoulda neva began did but i blow out rhymes...
While this niggaz a dick blower...
Uppin For Some Votes....................
And1 that was some horrible shit...
structure blows...look at some LLL battles
watch the news etc for concepts...
dont strecth the lines...
TRY RHYMING THE WORDS!
Fah-blah not that good decent better
than and1 mix... good job some okay punches
best line you had...
IP: 4FD6 0684
Quit rapping, It's leading you nowhere, You won't get signed..
Unless Interscope Records lost their lenses and happens to be blind
but you ruined it...too stretched a little tiny giggle
but not very quotable easy win here for you...
V/Fah-Q aka Thrust
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
Yea, not a great battle, but Fah Q takes this simply for more har hitting punches. And 1 tried to be witty a couple of times, but most of them were played and wack, which is not a good combination. Fah had more quotables, the streak line was ok and ur opener was decent too.
Vote - Fah Q
TNL
The Birth Of Creation
--Help us begin
[YOUTUBE]4sZK4Hd28VA[/YOUTUBE]
Yea...nothing much here I'm sorry to say.
Fah Q: Your verse wasn't anything special. You had a couple of decent lines in there, but a few of them were played or simply didn't hit hard. I felt that your closer was your best line. I dunno man...good structure..I just wasn't really feeling it though.
And1mix: I'm sorry I have to say this but I feel you need some more FL seasoning before you continue on in LLL Jr. You have some pretty good concepts but your structure and way of wording your punches are elementary and make your punches not hit very hard. Don't worry though, you got potential, you just need practice.
/v Fah Q
I didnt enjoy this that much, but my vote goes to Fah Q
He had better punches that hit harder then 1's.
"Quit rapping, its leading you nowhere, you wont get signed..Unless Interscope lost its lenses and happens to be blind,"
Vote= Fah Q
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Fah Q wins, closed.
And1mix (1-2)
Fah Q (2-3)
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Posting Rules
