My Heart

[kaotic~theory]

yo this was nice...
it had deep emotions,creativity,and nice flow....
i fell like i want to read more....lol

this was good
the chorus was dope also


one luv

[Steven William]

Wow...
well i can say it was good
this was a little bit above par a good read
concept is used a lot but you bring sort of
a new meaning I havent recognized before...
really didnt have too much complexity...
Vocab was decent but Imagery didnt really
seem to notice it much...but some points had it
good job Ace...(not good enuff for nominating)
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« for effort!

[Genocide21]

this was a tight verse
verse was also well worded
I hope you and your chick is okay
made me think tha I need to get a girl to tell her how i feel

PeAcE

[Ace of Aces]

thanks peepz i appreciate it. especially KT for getting this nominated it. and Genocide...you can get a chick easy...

peace

[J-Tray]

man that piece relly is a touch of skill the best I`ve seen in a long time made props

sincerly, J-Tray and payback & bomb sqaud
(records)

[Ace of Aces]

Thanks.

[Forlorn]

i will edit this for a reply when i get home, peice, thanks for replying on mine

[Ace of Aces]

^sounds good. thanks i appreciate it.

[GroundZero]

we need to get together on a collab of sorts, make an anthem for our bitches..or eh, i mean ladies...your style and mine would compliment each other forreal....the off rhyme multis and what not, like when you said

Between us, separating both of our hearts into two PARTS
As far as BLUE STARS that marked the start of NEW CHARTS

thats really how i lay it down too, two word rhymes, 3 word rhymes, I was really feelin that ish...

paz
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[Ace of Aces]

thanks man. i appreciate it.

[ilovekaycee]

umm kaycee dats 0-o its me dajone

[ilovekaycee]

kaycee u told me 2 get on nd ur ass not on xD boobies