"Da Party" and "Darkness"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/bigjdmusic.htm
some really tight beats i just made,hot shit......gimme some feedback.
"Da Party" and "Darkness"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/bigjdmusic.htm
some really tight beats i just made,hot shit......gimme some feedback.
can a nigga get some feedback?
Yes.Originally Posted by Big JD
Da Party:
Drums are horrible, very very weak. Umm, Im not sure what to say about this. I guess I could say listen to some music, and think if you could hear anyone besides Aaron Carter on this. The "Hey" added a lolly pop effect that I did not like.
Darkness:
This wasnt all that bad, better than the first. What program are you using? I cant tell if you are actualy making these beats or using loops...
I dont know what to say, hopefully you will get some good critique from other people. Just keep doing your thing.
^thanks
first off fuck all of da haters and suck my dick
y'all don't know how to rap all y'll talk about money and hoes that y'll ain't got.
Post feedback or leave my forum.
-Alc
Last edited by AlcaTrakz; March 30th, 2004 at 10:18 PM
Da Party - the kick is non existant. Raise the kick up or layer another SEVEN on there..lol...cause i dont hear a kick at all..well i do, but it's beyond weak...take out the swizz beats scratches..he dont even use them anymore. The clap is played as hell..but it does fit the beat....the chops you got going throughout the verse..raise them up a notch...the trumpet/horn chops im refereing to.
this is not "hot" really....its something to improve on though has potential.
.pz.
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-cise
Last edited by iNFiNiTY^; March 30th, 2004 at 10:33 PM
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its a descent beat not something id get on its needs work,i liked it,what did you use to make that beat?...100
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Eh... so-so, border-line corny. if this is your hottest i'd love to see your weakest, i need a good laugh... damn was that too honest? oh well, fuck it. OUT
I definately like Da Party. I was feeling it bcuz I'm a big Eddie Murphy fan 4real. So tha beginning got me hyped. And I was let down. Kick is sorta lacking, but it not something you can really tell.
Return tha favor.
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thanks for the feedback yah'll
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