This turned out to be a good read, The complexity was something to be questioned, the structure was also sloppy and also it lacked any wittily worded sentences, but now onto the good aspects of this piece which out weighs the bad points, the flow was smooth throughout and the vocabulary seemed very necessary for it, The emotion was the major attribute to this piece which made it worth my read, I guess this piece meant alot to you, I sense that though the emotion, Nice Piece. Pz Out