Aight 10 lines minimum 12 lines maximum...no beef after match...no prewrittens or borrowin...blind spits...u first.
Pz ~Wun~
Harlem's Finest
Kronix
Aight 10 lines minimum 12 lines maximum...no beef after match...no prewrittens or borrowin...blind spits...u first.
Pz ~Wun~
Blind spits... we both drop at the same time man... 30 mins from now?
Haha...did not mean 2 say u first, chea sounds good will b postin in 30
pz ~wun~
dam is gonna have to be a bit later...getting kickde off the comp ;\ this is NOt a xcuse to let me prewrite just lettin u kno...will update when i get back on ;\
When tho man? Just drop what you got now n I'll match it straight after...
If its til tomorrow no way...
ayo playa back up whatchu say bout goin back 2 blind spits 30 min?
now dis nigga not on...not entirely shure this shits workin out
aight wateva fuck it im spittin fuck blind spits...u reply wheneva u on k..
You think you got the skills...you think your spits are that great//
But nigga I'm the fuckin illest...So ill I Ill-Luminate//
This rhyme will certainly win...there's no need to debate//
So tolerate the loss and maybe just try to appreciate//
Defeats that keep you humble...you winnin? That's just distorted//
Your shits so wack we call it freepostin...son you gettin reported//
Your rhymes have no reason...like "Jin" your words sound imported//
Yall know my verse is better...so go ahead and vote for it//
If we were to be compared, I'd be Pac and you'd be Ching//
So here's to the MC me...just knocked you outta the ring//
Ok pz ~wun~
Man.. you should'a said you would be quick..
I'll drop now..
For ya first few posts on RB son... you already look a fool
Tried to start up ya own crew.. but instead got ridiculed
Postponed this sonning yaself when you could'a had a quick defeat
Reached the point of non-existance... and you're at ya mental peak
You'd lose money.. say 'shit happens'.. and think you'd coined a phrase
When in reality ya plain confused.. this herb thinks dumb's the new craze
Forget tryna gain victory reloading the page while droppin rhymes
Kid... thats not what people ask for with refreshing punchlines
Checked ya sig and in all honesty.. I don't know whats worse
That... or ya mention of 'Blind spits.. You drop first!'
ok close battle, you both used simula style so this is a tough decision.
KRONIX = You had good flow all the way thru the piece and there was some decent wordplay, you were lacking in vocab, and structure was ok you also had some nice punches.
Fave Line =Your shits so wack we call it freepostin...son you gettin reported
Your rhymes have no reason...like "Jin" your words sound imported
good 7/10
HARLEM = you also had good flow mabe a lil better than kronix also the vocab woz better. but you were lacking a bit in the wordplay, structure woz ok. and i felt your punches were more personal.
Fve line =Checked ya sig and in all honesty.. I don't know whats worse
that... or ya mention of 'Blind spits.. You drop first!
good 7 1/2 - 10
punches = harlem
flow = harlem
wordplay = kronix
structure = kronix
vocab = harlem
good close battle
Vote = Harlem
Pain Comes At A Price
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Ill return the favour!!
Wins:..CL (5-0)..Kwizikal (5-0)..
Uppin x1..........................................
Punches - Harlem
Flow - Harlem
Strucutre - Kronik
Metas - Harlem
Personals - Harlem
Wordplay - Neither
Multiz - Neither
Creativity - Harlem
Originality - Harlem
Vocab - Neother
Content - Tie
Vote - Harlem
Uppin x 2 . . . drop explained votes. . .
Harlem takes this on every cataogory & aspect of rap.
A big ass explanation would just make this seem closer then it is.
vote Harlem's Finest
..dispite a wack name..
Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game
My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.
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harlems takes this like virginity!!!
his punches hit harder, thats all it took to win the battles, he also gets it in most aspects!!
kronix, ur vocab did let you down a lil, but a nice flow was kept throughout the verse, take the // out of ur battles, an do it like a paragraph!!!
harlem keep it up!!
plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108890
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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