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    "True World".... New shit... Must Peep ... or DIE!!!

    I replied to Penskillz an' fgee.....

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    <<HOOK X2>>
    This how the world truely works
    you born, you die
    an' we'll all soon be dirt
    consumed with hurt
    thru satan
    i was brought unto this earth
    to preach unto the masses
    an' teach of the coming rapture

    how sick is deranged
    like
    how many kicks does it take
    to make putty of someones face
    i'm just not sane
    drug rot brain
    acid flash backs got me pluggin' up graves
    tuggin' on fuses so the shit'll detonate
    explode like timmothy mcveigh escaped
    an' had a second chance
    i step an' advance thru sections of black
    darkness, slum apartments
    roach motels an' someones dog barking
    pro'lly at an intruder
    a looter, a gangster, a rapist
    a psychopath like me
    that don't care who's life he taking
    my mind's tainted from taking
    8 day cocain vacations
    the pain's too great i can't take it
    so i release the tention
    by playin' god with the population
    body outlines in chalk on the pavement
    society's caving, you can't escape it
    it's a fact, you can't change it
    we all livin' in amity ville
    an' the exit's locked an' gated
    we caged in...

    <<HOOK X2>>

    I once wrote about common sense
    now i realize, what's the sense
    innocense is only a myth
    even the pope sins,
    which leads me to believe
    hope is pointless
    we all fucked in the long run
    controled by the long arm
    of the corrupt law
    a victem of police beatings
    malpractice during surgury procedings
    i was awake the whole time
    i seen my chest cavity bleeding
    an' these scars ain't leaving
    Love life like it had a meaning
    i'm-a jus' live mine
    'cause this ain't TV,
    you don't get a re-run
    ta correct mistakes
    it jus' ends an' ya set in graves
    follow the light
    an' for your wrong doings
    you sent to flame
    so you best repent your ways
    before it's too late
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    Didint like this that much..flow was straight..vocab wasnt..I couldnt really tell where you was going with it..like you was just saying random stuff out the blue..I guess I have to peep fgee's first..my advice is to stick to audio..and I dont mean that in a negative way..i give this a 5/10

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    u don't get the meaning... it 'bout the downfall of society... 2nd verse is pretty much true/ my point of view... 1st verse.. is pretty much jus' random shit 'bout how the world is today... i'll peep it./... 1
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    ^Dawg.. links are no longer needed lol

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    i didn't put links... .lol... jus; said who i replied to... is freeposting allowed now or something... shit u could-a atleast responded..
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    i thought the flow could have been better... and thought the first verse could have been more specific... the second was better i thought,,, but still the barz dont really match up......all in all an average piece.....pZ....
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