Word For Word P. w/ Camarac

[Sand]

the wise fool will try to Tempt the Masses w. Empty Glasses
the alcholic will share his Bottle dreams w. Whomever Passes

Train of Thought leaves the platform, as idea's Fade Away
While Crashing into the Wall Of Writer's block .. Where Humans Often Stay
Conducting Blades of grass, into a Suicide Symphony
Sadistically slashing Wrists Making The Quest for Common Knowledge A Mystery
life's like the Blistering Epitome of what i Came to Expect
The Head with No Neck Ritualistically Conducting Attempts At Oral Sex
i hang my Pictoral Sets in Galleries, so Picture Perfect
1000 words of Worth Couldn't mend or Flex the Broken Cervix
Spoken Word Is outdated, replaced with Bling Bling Anthem's
But my word's Reflect Brighter futures Than Any Necklace Damnit ! ..
the Reckless Manage survival, & yet the Good Die Young?
The Ironic Meaning of life To Depict Living As Something That Shouldn't Be Done
always figured i Wouldnt Become, just another Circus Act
I mean Aside From My Collossal Penis, I'm your Regular Whitebred Nerdy Kat
plotting Sturdy Facts into the Labrinth's of Speech, i Callously Preach
The Ins And Outs To Music, Sex With Music? .. Pass Me My Drink
and then, i'll Collapse Within an alcholic Mass of Fits
Ramblin Shit While I Pass A Fist At Pacifist,
I Used To Stand Tall With Hip Hop, Now I'm Inevitably Collapsed With It ..
so this Glass Of Gin now symbolises me, ready to be downed
Forget Spoken Word I See Alcoholism as the future .. follow me now ..

the wise fool will try to Tempt the Masses w. Empty Glasses
the alcholic will share his Bottle dreams w. Whomever Passes

[Johnny 6-feet]

strong, strong imagery here, some wicked puns, especially the opening line. i think you went a little overboard with the vocab though. still; a great topic, solid hook, good ideas, good work really.

more please.

[Baron Mynd]

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makes it look hella nicer = )

[Sand]

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[menolin]

completely nice shit all the way through,
some ill vocabulary, i dont now about it being overboard, but the younger peeps might not be able to grasp the concepts.

sounds like some jehst shit, from the uk.

nice drop peeps

[D-Chillz]

I agree wit Johnny

[Baron Mynd]

^ fuck off and reply properly.

[Sand]

he gives short replies to be like his penis .. err yeah

[snakeyes]

Yo, this was a hot joint, specially when i got to da middle. I like dat verse , "Spoken Word Is outdated, replaced with Bling Bling Anthem's But my word's Reflect Brighter futures Than Any Necklace Damnit "(sand 2003).

[Sand]

better recocnize .. but the first line was cam, =P

[Ackusation]

Quotables:

Conducting Blades of grass, into a Suicide Symphony
Sadistically slashing Wrists Making The Quest for Common Knowledge A Mystery

Dope meaning and the vocab / imagery / flow was perfect.

and then, i'll Collapse Within an alcholic Mass of Fits
Ramblin Shit While I Pass A Fist At Pacifist,

Just a well thought-out line, good work.

Overall a well put togethor piece that braught imagery and great delivery and presentation with the flow and vocab.

[pot1ent]

This was dope, I can't tell who's who, So I can't break down eachs part, But both of your lines emerged into one really imaginative/ progressive/ Fluent topic,

You Guys Are FluWent Like Prescribed Medicine.

^^ lol at my tired wordplay.. lol

Anywayz, This was a great read, You really pinned this one down as the best open mic up on top of the pages, Great read.

Pz

[Auspicious]

Akusation Pretty much nailed the quotables.
Deff was dope to see sum better heads in open mic.
Instead of noob infestation. This piece really hit hard
dope imagery, lyrics, content, vocab.. well you know
the deal.. n' cam ya right.. the center shit deff
makes it look Alot better

[Baron Mynd]

holla

[Sand]

back ..