Re: *Names' Not Important*
Dude. . .
This blew me away. It was an average piece, but the piece wasn't important. It was the effort you've given to entertain the writer and become abstract yet reasonable. This was a whole hearted piece from you, and this is what you call hard work from someone that's been trying to elevate from day one. The flow was the only thing that I asked you to work on and the flow was smooth as butter in here. There were a few little bumps but nothing major. If there were like a Junior HoF or something this would be the ideal piece for other pieces to go in here. Overall, I don't know if you worked hard on this or just got lucky but this was actually dope coming from you. Good job and good read.
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I dont think it was luck or hard work homie, I read 4 peices before making this.
You're collab with witness
Winter is Just by Heychoo
Me and Cries Colab
And A Atticus peices..
And for some reason I came up with this out of the images I felt by readin those peices. Thanx for the feedback dude,upps
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Yeah that flow is pretty smooth. Plus the wordplay was pretty good in this also. I forget what the name of the style you wrote in is called, I used it once a long time ago. I'd work on having a little more description and visualization for the reader and maybe read MacBeth by Shakespeare or something.
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