Sdizzle (3-3) vs Ex (3-3)

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i'm susposed to be 4-3.. and i'm tired of gettin this geek

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185308
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185285
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185293
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185281

i beat u last time

*ignores fact ex was dq'd and i woulda been ko'd*

listen up son.

i sonned you weeks back, please believe me raps wreckin
but here’s my opinion..
go ahead & sign out, like ya do everytime ya get a bad record
and them beats is weak and played - they’re nothin but shit
but son they not half bad, more like one hundred percent
i got a nine with shells, nigga we know ya ain’t rhymin well
cuz the grandfather clock said ya whack.. i guess time’ll tell
dust of ya shoulders, on text homie you’re not so fluent
cuz ya lines so outta place.. i thought picasso drew them
let me end this shit here, before i have this hoe bitchin
i just beat sdizzle to a pulp and that’s no fiction

u aint heard dizzles the shit, while ex is commin ass
and the future looks bright.. when ex is in the past
with ur wackass personals that aint even true
if michigan aint keep ya, why would richmond want to
could u please stop riding my dick? thanx ya little whore
dudes a diamond in the rough..
.....that was broken up and sold at a jewelery store
blah blah blah, i beat u last time, so fuckin what u were dq'd
2 outta 5 stars... the type thats prolly shootin at you
he really aint got a future, he'll be a bum layin on the ground
and X marks his talent... more shit that wont get found

i sonned you weeks back, please believe me raps wreckin
but here’s my opinion..
go ahead & sign out, like ya do everytime ya get a bad record
--ok..not real hard
and them beats is weak and played - they’re nothin but shit
but son they not half bad, more like one hundred percent
--old..but decent flip of it
i got a nine with shells, nigga we know ya ain’t rhymin well
cuz the grandfather clock said ya whack.. i guess time’ll tell
--same as above
dust of ya shoulders, on text homie you’re not so fluent
cuz ya lines so outta place.. i thought picasso drew them
--nah
let me end this shit here, before i have this hoe bitchin
i just beat sdizzle to a pulp and that’s no fiction
---decent

not too bad....NEEDS MORE CONCEPTS


vs

u aint heard dizzles the shit, while ex is commin ass
and the future looks bright.. when ex is in the past
---ok
with ur wackass personals that aint even true
if michigan aint keep ya, why would richmond want to
---coo
could u please stop riding my dick? thanx ya little whore
dudes a diamond in the rough..
.....that was broken up and sold at a jewelery store
---no
blah blah blah, i beat u last time, so fuckin what u were dq'd
2 outta 5 stars... the type thats prolly shootin at you
---no
he really aint got a future, he'll be a bum layin on the ground
and X marks his talent... more shit that wont get found
---i like

ehh...u seem like u COULD be good if u tried more

v- ex....in a semi decent match
both could prolly come harder

neither verse was that impressive but my vote has to go to sdizzle who came across colder and well constructed
v/sdizzle

Ex came with some decent shit, dizzle stop blah blah'n and come up wit some decent verbage. dizzle didnt have one punch worth quotin... so

v/Ex

V/ Ex's Avy.

still 1-1.........

GODDAMN IT VOTE PEOPLE.

ex def took this w/ a below par verse for him, but dizzle came pretty blah

v/ ex

Ex wins (4-3)

Sdizzle loses (3-4)