WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) FRESH WINS

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You cool w/ ext? @Fresh Been a busy week.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Tic

You cool w/ ext? @Fresh Been a busy week.

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of course

dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you

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Originally Posted by Tic

You cool w/ ext? @Fresh Been a busy week.

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Due tonight

Posting shortly, my bad for the wait.

Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea

dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
cool, liked it
you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
never seen this so i enjoyed it, wording was ok, concept was good
The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
wordplay was cool but the flip & everything else not so much unfortunately, poorly worded as well, unfortunate part is this could have been cool
I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
no sir, very basic/bad
u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you
dismiss wordplay is very very played to me and the flip didn't give it that much life but it's not terrible

/././

Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
wordplay is ok but the connection between both is very weak other than the base level one, this concept was very good but the way you used it, not as much
Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
i understand what you were trying here but this bar was literally you telling him you both thought you were going to fuck him so i absolutely cant even cosign the attempt here even though i see what you were going for
You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
he never got impeached so its a bit weird but i see what u attempted, quite basic but ok
Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
too basic man
No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea
alright

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fresh started off pretty solid tbh, like his style and it works very well in text, fell off near the end. tic came a lot weaker than i thought he would for some reason and his concepts were either basic or simply didn't work. not that close in my eyes unfortunately but props 2 both.

v/ fresh

Best match this week, from what I've skimmed

Fresh had the pure A's opener and no brainer bar, which were both cool. Bad breaks was decent too. Opener sticking out as BOTB

Tic started off a little awkward, as I had to reread the wordplays a few times over. Good attempts but the wording didn't jive with me, so they didn't work. Trump bar was weak, playing the field was okay, nautical was good. Unfortunately too little too late

Mvgt Fresh

dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
dope
you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
ehhh okish flip I guess
The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
cool, can't remember seeing the wp
I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
nah
u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you
not fresh enough for such a played wp.




Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
I really like the wp, not crazy about b-fly instead of butterfly. obv it wouldn't work otherwise but there was probably a better flip there. still ok
Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
not feeling this one
You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
eh. should've went a different direction with this concept
Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
not a creative enough flip to get past the played concept
No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea
decent


Fresh started off well, seemed like his last two bars he hit a wall on. Pretty sure Tic hasn't battled for a while before he signed in and that's how his verse came off to me. wording was clean for the most part but the concepts weren't quite there.



vote Fresh

3-0 fresh

dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
^^^ lol ok

you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
^^^ eh

The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
^^^ I like the concept, wording could be better.

I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
^^^ ok

u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you
^^^ iight

Vs


Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
^^^ ehh idk

Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
^^^ not feeling

You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
^^^ decent

Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
^^^ ok

No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea
^^^ nah tic’ll? Bit of a stretch but I’ll let it slide here.

I’ve seen better from both but I have fresh edging this off consistency.

v/Fresh

4-0 fresh wins