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You dead Echelon, this is the Red Dawn, I'll leave said pawn with his head gone.
Better shut the fuck up and put the cartoons on, before I start to rip apart you with a this baboon palm!
No one want's to hear this sad goon's song! You'll be mad soon when you loss and I drag you out on the lawn.
Goon stand back, No one want's to hear this mentally disabled poon's damn tracks,
My raps like a tablespoon of Anthrax! I might strangle you with a mic cable soon, or come at you with a hand ax!
Call yourself 'Baby Fox' this crybaby lost, My flowcrazy watch and learn maybe, but you'll never catch up like lazy cops!
I lay you out like a checkered cloth w/ the Vektor or the Heckler & Kotch.
You a notch on my leather, you couldn't walk in the veterans socks!
Lyrically I put your head in my crotch, this is more than a loss, you got your coordinates crossed,
Get floored and tossed by this boss who will eat your organs while your subordinates watch!
my rhyming is nice, combining with lice.lycan of time
time will be mine.'box on the shelf'...like you're retiring twice!
i've won..you've followed lost..jew holocaust.
ju/jew is gassed up like the nazi jewish holocaust..
rhyming lord of drinks..timely lord of jinx
you've been wack since the dinosaurs extinct//
coke and daggars cloaked in robes and lavish
fuck your mom on a soaken matress..than put your broken ashes in a open cakset..
Jutebox go sign up for LLL.
You keep starting battles here. No one votes here.
Alright I'll do that, thanks.
Up for votes.
@echolen meet the correct bar Limit or get dq’d
You have 24hrs to do so
A couple more lines won't help him. Up for votes..
We have rules here... he needs to fallow them... I’ll clean this thread up shortlyQuote:
Originally Posted by Jutebox
Jutebox wrote 10 lines, I thought I match him.
Here's more.
my rhyming is nice, combining with lice.lycan of time
time will be mine.'box on the shelf'...like you're retiring twice!
i've won..you've followed lost..jew holocaust.
ju/jew is gassed up like the nazi jewish holocaust..
rhyming lord of drinks..timely lord of jinx
you've been wack since the dinosaurs extinct//
coke and daggars cloaked in robes and lavish
fuck your mom on a soaken matress..than put your broken ashes in a open cakset..
eye of the tiger; stab you with a dinosaur horn..and devils horn
This kid thought he 'won' this battle..but was 'LOST' in the eye of the storm
the air is fulfilled with your screaming; the ILL of a gleaming
The 'long nose' will kill you 'in the middle of no-where'..like you were killed by a demon..
I light fools..I'll kill you with a knife in a pipe duel..
you're a wack rapper that is about as 'hot' as a ice cube..
I'm a wicked demon.. sinister reaping..
you're a cum guzzler..cum dumpter..drinking semon..
you're a nerd at comic-con..solemn sconce.
you're slow as hell..while this demon is faster than ramadan..
Panther and snake..you're a bat hanging upside down with no legs.
this is comparing a lame nerd..to alexander the great..
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UP for votes
Vote jutebox
Nothing really fully hit on either side but his attenpts seemed a little better then the shit e was spitting... E wasnt terrible just needs to work on connecting a punch..
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VOTE: JUTEBOX
Echelon
my rhyming is nice, combining with lice.lycan of time
(does anyone know wtf this means? and nice + lice don't =lycan)
time will be mine.'box on the shelf'...like you're retiring twice!
(he used time 2x's in a row, and mediocre punch)
i've won..you've followed lost..jew holocaust.
(really short line I feel he was just trying to fill his line quota)
ju/jew is gassed up like the nazi jewish holocaust..
(what doesn't rhyme better than holocaust than holocaust? lol)
Jutebox
You dead Echelon, this is the Red Dawn, I'll leave said pawn with his head gone.
(decent/good punch, good flow)
Better shut the fuck up and put the cartoons on, before I start to rip apart you with a this baboon palm!
(it looks like there was some unfinished editing at the end of the line so might want to fix that)
No one want's to hear this sad goon's song! You'll be mad soon when you loss and I drag you out on the lawn.
(this is had no point and you misspelled lose)
Goon stand back, No one want's to hear this mentally disabled poon's damn tracks,
(I had to look up poon, it fits but this was a weak punch, line stretch)