Hello from the Other Side (to pac, checking in)

Hello From the Other Side (To Pac)
2Pac - Hello Ft. B.I.G & Adele (Nozzy E Remix) (Prod By Yinon Beatz) - YouTube


(Over Pacs verse)
I don’t know much about twin flames or how I got an angel so great
You seen me thru it all and taught me how to be on time even when late
The debate? That shit got nothing to do with me – they’re all so consumed with hate
But memories of jumping waves in an open sea facing my babies dad still holding this weight
So who or what to say is fate…
I never felt so alive as to when I kicked him in the face on the switch
When you find your fire and finally fight back? Man you can’t fuck with a bitch
(When she starts singing let Pac finish verse)

(Over the first chorus)
Some days I curse my toungues or get mad when I think he thinks we are the wrong ones
But not selfish enough to throw it all in… I still love him to death even when evened in sin
I remember when I almost jumped the bridge that night
A racial pro to get it all done slow and a fire when I fight
I just came in to help and of a wrong make right
I used to laugh like I’m the only one that should do it – just cause I’m white

(Let chorus play… Hello from the other side)

(Over biggie)
Reassuring me thru the worst and the scariest it was you that was there
Chasing me out hotel rooms about to be busted – I can’t believe you truly cared
About me!
I don’t know what the legacy is that your building
My hottest line ever… “not everything that glitters is gold – it’s just gilding (it means gold plated)
I don’t have to run thru the reasons to prove I’m not lying
God will show enough even when falling but still trying
And when I’m crying? I know deep down it is his heart that ache too
And when I’m lost and confused I need to remind myself just turn to you
Why is it so hard to trust him Pac? Even the angel that cast doubt over you too?
(She was forced to kick me out…. Let biggies verse finish)

(Chorus play) x2

(Over biggie)
How you dead but alive at the same time?
Still breathing gives me hope that I too will survive
You think they ready? Are you trying to come back out?
I think I already said too much but crazy gives me a reasonable doubt
No doubt…
And as I run a comb thru my hair I remember La Sirene and the breathes as I stare
Through a time wrinkled and frobid, all in line, toy soldiers march aware until they forbid
Who taught me how to write? One of the best and for that I will fight
Who taught me how to fight? One of the realest and for that I will write
Who taught me about loyalty… well that was all you
I don’t ever want to doubt the angels grace while falling again true
In and out, left and right, side to side and back and forth too
If I had left one more breathe… I’d say get back up this war isn’t thru

This was a cool vibe. There’s parts where I think the wording could’ve been just a little smoother but I can tell you’re feeling the vibe and really saying something close to your own heart here. I was impressed with your language and how it’s evolved from the last few times I’ve read things from you. It’s interesting to see you change. It’s like many people writing many thoughts to me sometimes - but it also just genuinely feels like this dark place you’re coming from where you see hope inside the people you care about..there’s a sense of guilt you may feel underlying a lot of your writing and I don’t know what that is or where it comes from, but the guilt feels real. It feels like there’s this idea that you’re trying to convey about family and the importance of loyalty and learning to be true for someone. I like that a lot. It’s something many people can relate too. Keep the pen moving. You’ve got some good ideas and thoughts.

Thank you @Cody _nash

This is one of the greatest drop from you
Amazing how coming from your heart
Flow nice and smooth
I can tell you put lot of in it
That's part of being a writer
You been writing for a while
You are improving

Thank you @I_got_shine