@Ryno
12 Lines. Due 24hrs from your check in. Consider this my check in.
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@Ryno
12 Lines. Due 24hrs from your check in. Consider this my check in.
I love you too
@Ryno aka Bash aka Oddways
I'm back & Im hungry...
So if its beef? Then I'm famished! He'll be in need of a bandage..
Cuz this dweeb'll get damaged when I go ham on Ry like I'm eating a sandwich...
If I catch him out on a date? The whole clip I'm squeezing..
Soon as I see Odd plus one, Obviously I'm getting even
Run out of ammo? The blade'll have him looking like he stuck his neck in a grinder
Doc using all the thread in the winder, stitching Ryno like an Ecko designer!
My policy if he survives? Its vehicular homicide, a planned collision...
Line up Bash in the headlights, floor it then report it as Vandalism!
Trying to take me on single-handedly? Wouldn't be the best decision.
I'll keep steering rights at odd Wayze direction...like my G.P.S. is glitchin'
He let the animal out the cage..I had to rip him in two...
And leave Ryno behind bars quicker then a trip to the zoo..
Yeah I’m warming up too…
I don’t believe this wannabe’ll squeeze & ring, dawg my trouble too legit
The closest u’ve been to lining up rounds, is playing bubble shooter bitch
Why challenge the text warrior, nigga everything I say tough
Boy this fade’ll leave ya head all fucked up, like that shitty Kanye cut
Man I’m tired of wack niggas like u from other sights w/ all the hype
Leave ya corpse under the docs LEDs since u wanna be seen in a different light
Ya vibes just ain’t really lit, all those outlandish lies, forget it kid
Puttin exclamations at the end of every punch doesn’t mean the line was significant
& u’ve been raped plenty of times on the board, & between us it’ll be ya 2nd
I could threaten u w/ gun shots but lately u’ve been numb to the painful exits
Ur lucky I stick to text & I don’t flex on ur ugly mug maggot
One battle w/ pixie dust, & I bet that’s what u wear in ya selfies faggot
Haha maaaan... I feel like this one was leaning heavy to one side and I'm surprised. I was coming off reading some dope bars from Ryno in other battles so maybe my expectations were high for his bars, and then Phalanx ends up being the one here with the haymakers!! This was a dope match.
Ryno's bubble shooter, different light, and exclamations lines all came off kinda underwhelming for me. I wanted them to hit harder after I read them haha... the kanye cut line was decent. the gun shots line was meh for me. the pixie dust line was cool. I felt like Ryno coulda gone waaay harder man, but maybe it's cause I was just reading battles where he did go harder I dunno.
Phalanx Ry bread line was nutty. Right out the gate it was a heavy nameplay and I love the rhymescheme being incorporated. shit just flows smooth and hits hard at the same time when I'm reading. Odd plus one was tight. Ecko designer was creative but didn't hit heavy for me. That Bash in the headlights line was fuckin' hard lol. I haven't been around so all these nameplays are fresh and new for me. Sorry if they're played and been used, but damn they feel like zingers when I'm freshly returning to the forums hahah..the GPS line was straight. the ryno at the zoo line was nice. I had to struggle to find things I didn't like about this Phalanx verse right here. Haha.. good shit man for real.
I came in here prepared to vote for Ryno cause I seen him beastin on other people, but I'm leaving voting for the person I wasn't familiar with...dope battle ya'll.
Vote Phalanx
I'm back & Im hungry...
So if its beef? Then I'm famished! He'll be in need of a bandage..
Cuz this dweeb'll get damaged when I go ham on Ry like I'm eating a sandwich...
If I catch him out on a date? The whole clip I'm squeezing..
Soon as I see Odd plus one, Obviously I'm getting even
Run out of ammo? The blade'll have him looking like he stuck his neck in a grinder
Doc using all the thread in the winder, stitching Ryno like an Ecko designer!
My policy if he survives? Its vehicular homicide, a planned collision...
Line up Bash in the headlights, floor it then report it as Vandalism!
Trying to take me on single-handedly? Wouldn't be the best decision.
I'll keep steering rights at odd Wayze direction...like my G.P.S. is glitchin'
He let the animal out the cage..I had to rip him in two...
And leave Ryno behind bars quicker then a trip to the zoo..
I don’t believe this wannabe’ll squeeze & ring, dawg my trouble too legit
The closest u’ve been to lining up rounds, is playing bubble shooter bitch
Why challenge the text warrior, nigga everything I say tough
Boy this fade’ll leave ya head all fucked up, like that shitty Kanye cut
Man I’m tired of wack niggas like u from other sights w/ all the hype
Leave ya corpse under the docs LEDs since u wanna be seen in a different light
Ya vibes just ain’t really lit, all those outlandish lies, forget it kid
Puttin exclamations at the end of every punch doesn’t mean the line was significant
& u’ve been raped plenty of times on the board, & between us it’ll be ya 2nd
I could threaten u w/ gun shots but lately u’ve been numb to the painful exits
Ur lucky I stick to text & I don’t flex on ur ugly mug maggot
One battle w/ pixie dust, & I bet that’s what u wear in ya selfies faggot
Pretty good battle. Both had good verses. A GOOD; SIGNIFICANT BATTLE.
V/ Phalanx.
I'm back & Im hungry...
So if its beef? Then I'm famished! He'll be in need of a bandage..
Cuz this dweeb'll get damaged when I go ham on Ry like I'm eating a sandwich...
Creativity wise, this might've been bar of the battle. Super smooth
If I catch him out on a date? The whole clip I'm squeezing..
Soon as I see Odd plus one, Obviously I'm getting even
Decent jab
Run out of ammo? The blade'll have him looking like he stuck his neck in a grinder
Doc using all the thread in the winder, stitching Ryno like an Ecko designer!
Clever, well written
My policy if he survives? Its vehicular homicide, a planned collision...
Line up Bash in the headlights, floor it then report it as Vandalism!
Filler
Trying to take me on single-handedly? Wouldn't be the best decision.
I'll keep steering rights at odd Wayze direction...like my G.P.S. is glitchin'
Decent
He let the animal out the cage..I had to rip him in two...
And leave Ryno behind bars quicker then a trip to the zoo..
decent finish
Felt like you started really heavy and then kinda gassed into jabs towards the misses. Def came off the bell swinging for the fences though. the echo line and sammich line had me.
vs
I don’t believe this wannabe’ll squeeze & ring, dawg my trouble too legit
The closest u’ve been to lining up rounds, is playing bubble shooter bitch
Clever
Why challenge the text warrior, nigga everything I say tough
Boy this fade’ll leave ya head all fucked up, like that shitty Kanye cut
clever concept but not a very hard hit imo
Man I’m tired of wack niggas like u from other sights w/ all the hype
Leave ya corpse under the docs LEDs since u wanna be seen in a different light
I liked this, might be your best bar.
Ya vibes just ain’t really lit, all those outlandish lies, forget it kid
Puttin exclamations at the end of every punch doesn’t mean the line was significant
This was clever
& u’ve been raped plenty of times on the board, & between us it’ll be ya 2nd
I could threaten u w/ gun shots but lately u’ve been numb to the painful exits
not a fan of this one
Ur lucky I stick to text & I don’t flex on ur ugly mug maggot
One battle w/ pixie dust, & I bet that’s what u wear in ya selfies faggot
nah, weak finish
This was solid. You def had some haymakers in there but you also had some misses. Really fucked with the exclamation bar, the LED line, and the bubble shooter line. Good shit.
Consistency goes to Phal, bar of the battle goes to Phal, Ryno had more haymakers (3-2) but also had more misses. This battle, if a boxing match, would probably go to the score card with both dudes falling in at least one round. It's pretty close imo and hard to call for sure.
If I went off "who had the best bar", it'd be Phal. If I went off who had more heavy hits, it's Ryno...
So... I dunno honestly... hmm...
Phal - 2 haymakers, 3 jabs, 1 miss.
Ryno - 3 haymakers, 1 jab, 2 misses.
Vote Phal for the more consistent fight. Close af though.
Ok
Ryno I like the Kanye line, the LED and the pixie closer. Phalanx I used a very very similar Rye Bread line on this guy that everybody seem to have had a problem with. I think I'ma give you props for maybe wording yours a little more thorough cuz I was in a rush and forgot about my battle till an hour before the deadline. So I'ma give you credit for the rye Bread, Odd number addition line, the Waze Gps and the funny ass Zoo closer so MVGT Phalanx.