Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@Blue Bayou @Fresh
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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Blue Bayou @Fresh
ive had no recent deaths in my life. please take it easy on me
u spittin gun bars; yeah ok lol and waters dry.. ur a fake n u know it
u'll get shot w/ the super soaker.. cause the way an ak spray, it's like the wave of an ocean
you've never dropped fire in ya life
newsflash, you ain't mind blowin'...& neither does your wife
Lol’ed at Blue’s punch cause I felt like it was a funny misdirection. Fresh had a cool concept but I feel like it didn’t have a zing or sting for some reason? The wording was off and just felt like I was reading a statement. I would’ve liked to see more effort on the mind blowin concept as well. Who’s mind she blowing? Blue’s? Everybody’s? Fresh’s? Felt indirect and this setup could have been stronger.
Vote Blue
MVGT BLUE BAYOU
His set up was very subtle and nonchalant. Then you read the next line and it's dismissive tone and ended up being funny.
With Fresh I think the set up was a little wordy. I think it woulda been more insultish if you woulda said "and water's wet". I did like the gun metaphor connection but if you woulda worked the wording a little bit it coulda came off smooth as hell.
Vote Blue
Blue had a simple but clean jab. Fresh had a decent concept but got kind of wordy, and lost some impact.
That was a pretty slick line from blue
Kinda funny
Fresh tried the personal approach but I wasn’t feeling the concept of it at all.
V. Blue
Wasn't feeling this battle but I'll vote Blue
Fresh bro I did not understand your bar this week, I think it was a little too forced and I didn’t grasp the concept.
Blue your bar was decent and good enough to take the cake here
Vote blue bayou
Blue Bayou Wins 6-0