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Stuck!
More pills! Make me immortal
Reality hasn't reached the door, still
Walk through the portal, with portions
Of distorted morphine paints a portrait
of morbid corpses decaying in orbit.
I stray, I'm an orphan. Enslaved without purpose
Searching for my place in the storage
Erasing my mordem
when I'm in the grave lets see em try to extort me!
Bigwigs chortling, im the victim
Hear em say "We tricked him"
gave him visions, eyeballs livid
I recall I'm living broken
Tripped out and lonesome
But I can't switch my focus
To different notions
And kill this lonesome shadow that follows me
As I persist this motion
A sad moan tears down my anatomy
But who's aware the sound shattered me
To the system I'm a frowning masterpiece
These puppeteers stay shouting blasphemy
The sound is saddening. Madness, this package chases after me
This isn't just a ghastly dream. I've met with reality
And I'm not pleased to meet it
Fading out of my dream sequence
These mean demons that surrounded me since
My teen weekends, where the harsh beatings occured
When I was a bird
By these chains only freaks see!
No meetings, no clinic no way I can win it
I'll just bleed till I'm missing
Feebly kissing
The ground level goodbye
I'm stuck in the sky
Troubled mind
I am high
Much too high
now that ive returned, im trynna shake of the bit of rust, throwing around schemes, strings, rhymes and topics.. u know
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I love you soul
.. good to have another abst counter part back. grab some links for me though.. I'll give you until tomarrow or some shit. go to the collective's thread aswell, collab ideas floating around.
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I really couldn't follow what you were talking about but its sounds nice and thats all that really counts right? But anyway i can't really find a topic here at all. Like at first i though you were trapped in space and then you went to completely another place and came back again...idk...good use of vocabulary though, you sound a little wimsical with your rhyme scheme, idk but good job anyway
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the piece was great man. it kind of juggled simplisity and complicated poetic aspects, but overall it was this mass of pure creativity. I loved the sense of dissorganization. it almost mimmicked the content. the lack of structurdized rhyme scheme is something a lot of people fuck up, but with you, it was handled like a true abst.co pro. the reader only has to read on, and everything will roll off the tongue without a single flaw or break. the content was cool as well. it kind of drifted between realms of real and surreal in the styles of the descriptions and imagery. overall, I enjoyed it a lot. hyped to have you back man.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=324274
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