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@KrazyK
check in and I'll let you know when this is due, KrazyK.
This is my check in.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...316/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...415/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...547/index.html
iight check
Good.
Due 30 minutes from your check in. Let's get it.
@KrazyK
lol yo ima nee dmore time i aint that nice nowQuote:
Originally Posted by ...Celph Taut
Quote:
Originally Posted by KrazyK
How long do you need? :facepalm:
AH SCREW IT, you drove my energy down. We'll make it due Sunday night. (11:59pm EST)
dope
fp bros.........
you swear your girls loyal, even married her and hoped she'd stay for good
call it celph fish, until he goes to work then its the neighborhoods
sitcom bitch, to think of beating me is sad n crazy mate
i'll have you breaking bad, for even thinkin you had krazy 8
watch out for Krazy legs, im throwing kicks you know gone kill
while you struggle to b-boy...from the lack of hormone pills
#KISSMYASS, tweet it out cuz i aint nothing to fuck wit
im taking celph ease XD minus the puckering duck lips
your crew some passive ass niggas wit some dead end bars
really... who'd ever give a Dam to see res ev war?
how are you a vet,when it come to text its like your copying the worste
so if anything is taken out of kontext... its probly in your verse
which means you winning is Ridiculous, you should take a day off kid
cuz he champed the league you couldnt even make the play offs in
your beastly wit the audio, in text you just not sellin it
be your old celph, the fat man formely known as Celephant
lol idk
Key...
This kid'll be... riding my jock. Trying to jot lines... thinking he's aligning wit' Taut...
But this time you'll get rocked... do a number on ya, K... inside, I'm winding the clock...!!!
But yo... your signature's cool... with your name in it. Pfft...fucking lame gimmick.
You stay timid, Porn out your soul, but bro - it still Ain't VIVID...
I'm fly, minus the plane ticket... you saying you'll be Krazy, with me?
(Nah), plainly, you'll C K Louis battle without Comedy play on the scene...
But look... you've stayed in a dream, bro.. I'm Mr. Clean with that mean glow...
Your keys blow... your 16's low on the screen, like the MTV show!
LOL @ KrazyK, faggot may be gay... you ain't Grime-y, you be dumber than shit.
To Be Frank? your lines dragging behind the rear on some Punisher shit!
Give you a Stone Cold look... before I stunner this bitch. Ha... stay in your lane.
You nickle and dime-n battles - you're paying for change. Bitch, this ain't an exchange!
But it could be. Your girl make my Charlie Brown, nigga. Good Grief!
They ain't call this rook, Chief... he only eye candy cause he LOOK sweet...
So fuck outta my face with the Bull, K... my echelon's is higher than yours...
I should've never PAID attention to your reply... I'm having buyers remorse...
#KISSMYASS, tweet it out cuz i aint nothing to fuck wit
im taking celph ease XD minus the puckering duck lips
and
how are you a vet,when it come to text its like your copying the worste
so if anything is taken out of kontext... its probly in your verse
These were decent Krazy, the second line especially keep thinking in concepts like that and you'll up your game in no time. The rest of your bars for the most part were weak, but you're heading in the right direction you've been improving alot in the last week or so.
VS.
I'm fly, minus the plane ticket... you saying you'll be Krazy, with me?
(Nah), plainly, you'll C K Louis battle without Comedy play on the scene...
and
Give you a Stone Cold look... before I stunner this bitch. Ha... stay in your lane.
You nickle and dime-n battles - you're paying for change. Bitch, this ain't an exchange!
To be honest, I thought K came fairly hard here and although Celph takes this, I think with one or two more decent bars from Krazy and he could have got this. Celph did have the harder hitting verse, with better rhyme scheme and personals as well
v/Celph
only liked one lined...Celph was the only one putting his roar in his lyricsQuote:
Originally Posted by ...Celph Taut
3 links fellas
you swear your girls loyal, even married her and hoped she'd stay for good
call it celph fish, until he goes to work then its the neighborhoods
sitcom bitch, to think of beating me is sad n crazy mate
i'll have you breaking bad, for even thinkin you had krazy 8
#KISSMYASS, tweet it out cuz i aint nothing to fuck wit
im taking celph ease XD minus the puckering duck lips
how are you a vet,when it come to text its like your copying the worste
so if anything is taken out of kontext... its probly in your verse
vs
But yo... your signature's cool... with your name in it. Pfft...fucking lame gimmick.
You stay timid, Porn out your soul, but bro - it still Ain't VIVID...
But look... you've stayed in a dream, bro.. I'm Mr. Clean with that mean glow...
Your keys blow... your 16's low on the screen, like the MTV show!
So fuck outta my face with the Bull, K... my echelon's is higher than yours...
I should've never PAID attention to your reply... I'm having buyers remorse...
best battle ive seen in FL other than a champ match. Both had good punches, flips and wording. just felt celph had a few bars that seemed forced and didn't land as hard as it could. good ish from both. very close one to decide on.
v. krazyk
you swear your girls loyal, even married her and hoped she'd stay for good
call it celph fish, until he goes to work then its the neighborhoods
Ok'ish.
sitcom bitch, to think of beating me is sad n crazy mate
i'll have you breaking bad, for even thinkin you had krazy 8
Ok'ish
watch out for Krazy legs, im throwing kicks you know gone kill
while you struggle to b-boy...from the lack of hormone pills
No - I think you could have went in a different direction and could have possibly went with the whole, Krazy Legs / Throwing Kicks / B-Boy concept to make your set up more relevant, IMO.
#KISSMYASS, tweet it out cuz i aint nothing to fuck wit
im taking celph ease XD minus the puckering duck lips
No
your crew some passive ass niggas wit some dead end bars
really... who'd ever give a Dam to see res ev war?
No
how are you a vet,when it come to text its like your copying the worste
so if anything is taken out of kontext... its probly in your verse
Ok'ish
which means you winning is Ridiculous, you should take a day off kid
cuz he champed the league you couldnt even make the play offs in
I've seen this mans name in like 9 verses the last week or so, don't want to see it again. SMH
your beastly wit the audio, in text you just not sellin it
be your old celph, the fat man formely known as Celephant
No.
vs
This kid'll be... riding my jock. Trying to jot lines... thinking he's aligning wit' Taut...
But this time you'll get rocked... do a number on ya, K... inside, I'm winding the clock...!!!
I like your concept, Celph. But think you struggled to execute the punch, IMO.
But yo... your signature's cool... with your name in it. Pfft...fucking lame gimmick.
You stay timid, Porn out your soul, but bro - it still Ain't VIVID...
Ok, Porn is supposed to be a play on words, pouring, correct? If so. Just seemed a little forced to me, IMO. However, I do like the concept but like the last bar, just think you failed to execute on the punch, came off statement'ish.
I'm fly, minus the plane ticket... you saying you'll be Krazy, with me?
(Nah), plainly, you'll C K Louis battle without Comedy play on the scene...
Ok'ish.
But look... you've stayed in a dream, bro.. I'm Mr. Clean with that mean glow...
Your keys blow... your 16's low on the screen, like the MTV show!
Eh... Don't like.
LOL @ KrazyK, faggot may be gay... you ain't Grime-y, you be dumber than shit.
To Be Frank? your lines dragging behind the rear on some Punisher shit!
Ok'ish.
Give you a Stone Cold look... before I stunner this bitch. Ha... stay in your lane.
You nickle and dime-n battles - you're paying for change. Bitch, this ain't an exchange!
Eh...
But it could be. Your girl make my Charlie Brown, nigga. Good Grief!
They ain't call this rook, Chief... he only eye candy cause he LOOK sweet...
Ok'ish.
So fuck outta my face with the Bull, K... my echelon's is higher than yours...
I should've never PAID attention to your reply... I'm having buyers remorse...
Could have worked with this. But ok'ish.
This is probably one of your better verses Krazy. Some improvements. Work on your concepts bruh. I see you have the idea of battling down, just need to execute on your concepts. Try not to be so complex either. Remember, your punches need to land/have impact. Diss your opponent. You definitely dropped less self glory and focused more on dissing your opponent which is a major plus. Celph, you had a pretty consistent verse, it was pretty cool. Some nice concepts which you struggled to execute on. I can definitely tell you are an "Audio Head" because your flow, lol. Nothing wrong with that, I definitely like the flow in your verses as well as your concepts but sometimes you fail to execute on them. Also see you have sort of a "Complex" style. Your in to the wrd plays a lot, not bad. I digg it.
Anyways, MVGT: CELPH. Just think he had less misses here.
@KrazyK uve already been told to get links in this battle. u have until midnight eastern time to get links or your DQed