WK3 RND 2:Joog Vs Lay Doubt[open for votes]

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@joig @Lay Doubt

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Fk my school. And fk my teacher too
Sniper on the roof and he playin peek a boo
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I just hit that nigga for his work
Finessed em..stick n move, then i skrt, skrt, skrt
-Kodak Black

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No nameplay...but when the flame spray, u'll be laid out in a mess
I hope ur duckin skills r up to par, Lay.. Cuz these bullets plan to hang out w ya chest

lol.. stfu

this fairy being G's a fantasy, we don't believe you're ever the hardest bruh
your faggot ass is soooo far in the closet you're probably having adventures in Narnia

Either lay was drunk on a Friday or just lazy... the grammar / wording / set up wasn't the best here... hardest Bruh and Narnia, on the other corner, joog had an ok concept with a decent np. Vote. goes to Joog

Vote joo his wasn't over worded and didn't ruin a good concept

Seen the parlay np flip but joog had a fresh direct flip overall to it. I wasnt feeling lays setup. The finisher was a great concept but like i said the setup butchered the punch as a whole for you.

V/Joog

Vote- Jong

I'm guessin the par lay is played against him
But Joog flipped it nice. Lays Narnia line was cool but
I'd have to give it to joog. I just liked it more.

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Spell check is a hater.

Joooog here
par lay seems old but flip was coo
narnia old too and wording was off

mvgt joogn

great battle lmao

Lay made me laugh, his punch was good. Joog was impressive, and since i was inactive last LLL season im not sure how fresh that nameplay was but i enjoyed it a lot, though the execution wasn't as smooth as i'd like. but overall joog's punch was well developed with a great concept.

Vote: Joog

Cool battle...

Lay- alot of ppl said ur wordin was off, but i didnt think so. Thought is was ok. It was funny lol

Joog (pronounced in cuban as tony montana)- ur nameplay was dope. I thought ur wordin was good too.

Overall this was a dope lil battle. I just liked joog's bar more.

V/ joog

Parlay didn't have a tie in, it was just out there on its own. I think u tried to tie it in with hang out but a Parlay is a negotiation, usually to discuss terms of surrender. So it came off as underwhelming.

Luckily for joog lay dropped one of the most played lines ever.


V. Joog ehh?

Cool battle. Lay did his thing but joog was too much here

V/joog

Joog wins