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yo that was mad hott. i mean i liked the different styles..the wordplay was good.if u dont already u should come up wit a beat and put that as a track.. i mean it may be crazy but i know for a fact ppl have no reason not to like it..BE EASY HOMIE..1..HOTT SHIT
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Twisted theres not much to say that nobody else has..Shit was mad deep..vocab was there,imagry was there,damn and chapters to with different shit goin on..original piece man tho flow could of been better.strectch lines but still nice shit..like the concept........should go on legends for real homie ill give it a 9.5/10 just cause flow was lil off at times
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248980
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248839
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WoW, thats all i can say.
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As of right now all I have to say is..
Most likely #1 HOF this month, but not legends material.
Nice drop though Twizt shit was dope imagery kinda stretched didn't get boring - but I think you strayed off for a few lines randomly for filler etc. Legends is more of a perfectionst thing, nah mean?
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this was a dope piece ..nice flow,nice vocab,and nice structure ..10/10
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WOW!!
jesus christ man... dat shit is chilling... u sure dat shit is yours? coz dats fuckin profesional!! more of a poem ay... coz da creative writing and imagery techniques were at tha fullest! this shit is stunning bro, litterly. your a real poet. go pro man, you can do it. keep it up.
yup if you could just vote for these i'd really REALLY appreciate it ay...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=thoughts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=thoughts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=thoughts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=thoughts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=thoughts
Thanx heaps man... luv your work... looking forward to seeing more.
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Talking about indepht writing...
am impressed.....most realize this a topical..lol concept u used is nice...creative how u did some of the transitions...i may not be a topical writer but i can deffinitly see the work you put in.....emotions are cool...some of them you could have reworded it differently to make it more smoother but the rest imagery was well done.
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*breakdances*
thanks key rogue.
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This was nice man..very creative..the content of
all verses was real nice, and your had some quotables
strong piece imo, you put alot of imagination in this really
felt this, a very deep piece..nice 1 lad. Great drop
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dat shit is type hot........very creative n deep .....good job ma nig9a
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nice shit here... had a good morbid feel to it that really got me capture in the it. God's handbook also put good perpectives on it. Nice work here very well put toghether... i enjoyed the read was interesting pretty much the whole way thew... just because it was peiced together well... good flow and vocab all the biscs coverd and more... nice.
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yo son i dont know where to start homey, ur vocab left me speechless man. Your piece was nice and well creative. I think u did very good homey but u know critism only make u better so imma say u need to work on ur structure and complexity. Nice stuff though lookin forward to more of ur drop aight
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that was real!!! and anyone how disses god and his word is not to smart! the word comes from the heart and that's how i feel about it so don't let know one tell u different.nothing concerning god and his prepose is wack the person who said this was wack just doesn't understand it and with that comment make that individual wack!!!!! now what!!!!
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lol @ you upping this... I just wanted to show you it.. Ah well.
You really Manic's girl?
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penis aye, dropping fyar as usal, nice work man i enjoyed the whole concept..