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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...94#post7699094
His Links and My Links.
TayTay's Verse
you've been on my nutts trying to battle, i just wanna know 1thing
how is it that your such a Group - E, w/o being from any of those countries
Last week I advanced in the tournament, and athough it may sound fun
I don't wanna get too per$onal, but ur ass will suffer the same outcome
your not talented nigga, you'll never be anything great on here yah dig
dawg theres mushroom for improvement, and even then u wont make it big
Flowgodz is a joke dude, you made it to the finals and all but in reality
If we hear your War Cry, you're prolly just PMing tryna win by technicality
You have a ghostwriters too dude, when u win it's in the gayest of ways
Because you see my skill comes naturally, u just jam out to that song all day
M-Var!o's Verse
talkn much shit, but back up nothing but ass...an it aint surprisin
you wouldnt hold yo ground if you were a disciplined private
im confused, am i battling a dude? did your sex flipflop
TT's and a period......aint that the same thing a chick got
tells lil boys "you like to shoot?i gotta pistol in my pants son"
strange to have a samauri on playgrounds tryna shogun
he's not a hustler, PLEASE, hell will freeze if you ever hold keys
blak could never manage white like the negro league
with your retarded duck face i swear tay will never get layed
bitches wouldnt put hands on "T" callin a tech in the WNBA
vote up, leave links.
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Last week I advanced in the tournament, and athough it may sound fun
I don't wanna get too per$onal, but ur ass will suffer the same outcome
your not talented nigga, you'll never be anything great on here yah dig
dawg theres mushroom for improvement, and even then u wont make it big
vs
he's not a hustler, PLEASE, hell will freeze if you ever hold keys
blak could never manage white like the negro league
vote=taytay,
better verse overall....mario keep elevatin...
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Taytay
Last week I advanced in the tournament, and athough it may sound fun
I don't wanna get too per$onal, but ur ass will suffer the same outcome
your not talented nigga, you'll never be anything great on here yah dig
dawg theres mushroom for improvement, and even then u wont make it big
vs
M-Vario
talkn much shit, but back up nothing but ass...an it aint surprisin
you wouldnt hold yo ground if you were a disciplined private
Meh
Analysis
One sided battle IMO. If I was being honest I doubt M's best bar was better than Tay's worst. Vario needs to work on harder hitting punches & his shit not coming across as some 10 minute key. Tay's 2 quoted bars on their own were better than M's WHOLE verse, better wordplay,punches & his entire verse being worded better as a whole.
Vario get creative.
V/ Tay
yo Tay, my bad i didnt hit this before man, i was using my PS3 internet when u voted and i didnt feel like doin it from my ps3 but dont think i did that shit on purpose.....
you've been on my nutts trying to battle, i just wanna know 1thing
how is it that your such a Group - E, w/o being from any of those countries
cool
Last week I advanced in the tournament, and athough it may sound fun
I don't wanna get too per$onal, but ur ass will suffer the same outcome
nice
your not talented nigga, you'll never be anything great on here yah dig
dawg theres mushroom for improvement, and even then u wont make it big
ehh... iight
Flowgodz is a joke dude, you made it to the finals and all but in reality
If we hear your War Cry, you're prolly just PMing tryna win by technicality
nahh
You have a ghostwriters too dude, when u win it's in the gayest of ways
Because you see my skill comes naturally, u just jam out to that song all day
nice
mvario
talkn much shit, but back up nothing but ass...an it aint surprisin
you wouldnt hold yo ground if you were a disciplined private
simple
im confused, am i battling a dude? did your sex flipflop
TT's and a period......aint that the same thing a chick got
cool
tells lil boys "you like to shoot?i gotta pistol in my pants son"
strange to have a samauri on playgrounds tryna shogun
nah
he's not a hustler, PLEASE, hell will freeze if you ever hold keys
blak could never manage white like the negro league
ehhhhhh
with your retarded duck face i swear tay will never get layed
bitches wouldnt put hands on "T" callin a tech in the WNBA
nahhhh
v/tay
mv's shit was ok but played and simple
you've been on my nutts trying to battle, i just wanna know 1thing
how is it that your such a Group - E, w/o being from any of those countries
- meh ok ish
Last week I advanced in the tournament, and athough it may sound fun
I don't wanna get too per$onal, but ur ass will suffer the same outcome
- eh
your not talented nigga, you'll never be anything great on here yah dig
dawg theres mushroom for improvement, and even then u wont make it big
- forced
Flowgodz is a joke dude, you made it to the finals and all but in reality
If we hear your War Cry, you're prolly just PMing tryna win by technicality
- ok ish, but still meh
You have a ghostwriters too dude, when u win it's in the gayest of ways
Because you see my skill comes naturally, u just jam out to that song all day
- nah
vs
talkn much shit, but back up nothing but ass...an it aint surprisin
you wouldnt hold yo ground if you were a disciplined private
- huh?
im confused, am i battling a dude? did your sex flipflop
TT's and a period......aint that the same thing a chick got
- nah
tells lil boys "you like to shoot?i gotta pistol in my pants son"
strange to have a samauri on playgrounds tryna shogun
- nopes
he's not a hustler, PLEASE, hell will freeze if you ever hold keys
blak could never manage white like the negro league
- wtf
with your retarded duck face i swear tay will never get layed
bitches wouldnt put hands on "T" callin a tech in the WNBA
- weak
Overall - your both ass in this battle, Tay had more wit and harder punches, if you even call it that. Vario had some weird wording that killed any descent attempt he put together, work on it dawg. v- Tay
Last week I advanced in the tournament, and athough it may sound fun
I don't wanna get too per$onal, but ur ass will suffer the same outcome
vs
talkn much shit, but back up nothing but ass...an it aint surprisin
you wouldnt hold yo ground if you were a disciplined private
Ehn. Taytay got this by having some decent bars and some badly executed concepts and puns/wordplay etc against somebodo who used used concepts etc and generally came with something overall confusing.
V/ TayTay
Last week I advanced in the tournament, and athough it may sound fun
I don't wanna get too per$onal, but ur ass will suffer the same outcome
Flowgodz is a joke dude, you made it to the finals and all but in reality
If we hear your War Cry, you're prolly just PMing tryna win by technicality
vs
tells lil boys "you like to shoot?i gotta pistol in my pants son"
strange to have a samauri on playgrounds tryna shogun
bad attempt at wordplay^
Tay this verse wasnt realatively strong for u dude,,, looks like u went limp on him.....
vario i see u are elevating.....especially since in our battle
but mvgt tay
for better structure and sting quality