Echelon vs Cody Nash (Text) - Cody Nash wins.

Echelon's verse...

I'm ECHELON -- PEON -- SCION -- PEON -- SCION//
I have a scorpion sting.. kiss the ring.. kiss the ring.. you remind me of a wack RA SCION//
I'm on the onslaught of war; SLAUGHTERING OGRE'S IN WAR//
BOULDER'S OF GORE..you're not a solider in war.. I'll burn you like a ghost on a SMORGASBOARD..//
I'm slaughtering war; OFFSPRING OF WAR; OFFSPRING OF WAR//
I'll pray..than drop you on the concrete floor//
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR; dropping atomic bombs//
ATOMIC BOMB..wrestling move..is the only time you have a atomic drop//
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR; coughing ghosts flying on smorgasboard//
WHORE THE GORE.. I'm attacking niggers'..like GORE'S IN WAR//
I'm ECHELON -- EON -- PEON -- SCION-- SCION --//
Depart the EON.. I've been battling for eons..ripping apart this PEON//
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR..causing calamaties and trajedies//
I'm in a calvary..whether you prostrate or pray..you'll call me your majesty//
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR..causing calamaties and trajedies//
ILL WITH AMNESTY..I'll commit genocide..and kill your family//
I'm causing casulties of war..battle me with force..//
HAPPY HALLOWEEN..I'm stabbing you with gore//
I'm causing casulties of war..battle me with force..//
RESIDENT'S PRESIDENT'S -- I'LL SPIT GENOCIDAL PESTILENCE//

I swear I ain’t gotta try…you were done the moment you start
Like hiking with no bathroom…I could beat this shit with a fart
That was NOT hard, just hard reading - really it was extensive…
Like writin love letters in prison, he gave me a run on sentence
Bars look like choruses..there’s some screws in your head missin
So I’ll drill this loss in his skull like I made an attempt to fix him
Seems like he’s on drugs, in poor health, and apparently drinks liquor
So I drop bars on the lower echelon like I’ll save him punchin his liver
droppin bars like he’s 13, this forum rappers a deepfake
Just repeats inside his arsenal…like another Halloween remake
This masked man isn’t foolin…you wrestling with a titan
when Omos steps in the ring…AJ’s eclipsed by a giant
Took days to accept this callout..and this was the guy I’m stuck with
Some village idiot from the jungle who’s head might have be shrunken
It’s quickly I make the cut..it’s no effort no matter what…
Knife this kid for the sport…if the sport was not giving fucks…
With beef it’s vegetarian habits…compare us and buddy’s squemish
RA Scion? I wrote a track with…you ride in scions to chucky cheeses
Beheaded, now he can fall…The kids penance was havin balls…
It’s definitely 2021, how Aj the fuckin menace got Dennis lookin’ adult

I'm ECHELON -- PEON -- SCION -- PEON -- SCION//
I have a scorpion sting.. kiss the ring.. kiss the ring.. you remind me of a wack RA SCION//
No.
I'm on the onslaught of war; SLAUGHTERING OGRE'S IN WAR//
BOULDER'S OF GORE..you're not a solider in war.. I'll burn you like a ghost on a SMORGASBOARD..//
No.
I'm slaughtering war; OFFSPRING OF WAR; OFFSPRING OF WAR//
I'll pray..than drop you on the concrete floor//
No.
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR; dropping atomic bombs//
ATOMIC BOMB..wrestling move..is the only time you have a atomic drop//
No.
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR; coughing ghosts flying on smorgasboard//
WHORE THE GORE.. I'm attacking niggers'..like GORE'S IN WAR//
No.
I'm ECHELON -- EON -- PEON -- SCION-- SCION --//
Depart the EON.. I've been battling for eons..ripping apart this PEON//
No.
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR..causing calamaties and trajedies//
I'm in a calvary..whether you prostrate or pray..you'll call me your majesty//
No.
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR..causing calamaties and trajedies//
ILL WITH AMNESTY..I'll commit genocide..and kill your family//
No.
I'm causing casulties of war..battle me with force..//
HAPPY HALLOWEEN..I'm stabbing you with gore//
No.
I'm causing casulties of war..battle me with force..//
RESIDENT'S PRESIDENT'S -- I'LL SPIT GENOCIDAL PESTILENCE//
Stop It.

I think maybe it's about time you either get on medication or your mother sends you somewhere to get the help you need. This wasn't a battle verse and I've seen you post almost this exact same verse in cypher threads on NC. Your vocab repetition, when compared to the pieces you used to write, is proof enough that either you aren't the original AJ The Menace...you're a full time troll... or you need medical assistance. I want what's best for you and really think you should seek a doctor out.

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I swear I ain’t gotta try…you were done the moment you start
Like hiking with no bathroom…I could beat this shit with a fart
Gross.
That was NOT hard, just hard reading - really it was extensive…
Like writin love letters in prison, he gave me a run on sentence
Eh.
Bars look like choruses..there’s some screws in your head missin
So I’ll drill this loss in his skull like I made an attempt to fix him
Okay.
Seems like he’s on drugs, in poor health, and apparently drinks liquor
So I drop bars on the lower echelon like I’ll save him punchin his liver
nah
droppin bars like he’s 13, this forum rappers a deepfake
Just repeats inside his arsenal…like another Halloween remake
okay.
This masked man isn’t foolin…you wrestling with a titan
when Omos steps in the ring…AJ’s eclipsed by a giant
cool concept, meh wording
Took days to accept this callout..and this was the guy I’m stuck with
Some village idiot from the jungle who’s head might have be shrunken
nah
It’s quickly I make the cut..it’s no effort no matter what…
Knife this kid for the sport…if the sport was not giving fucks…
cool concept
With beef it’s vegetarian habits…compare us and buddy’s squemish
RA Scion? I wrote a track with…you ride in scions to chucky cheeses
Kinda plays off one of his lines, a bit of a no no normally rule wise
Beheaded, now he can fall…The kids penance was havin balls…
It’s definitely 2021, how Aj the fuckin menace got Dennis lookin’ adult
nah

Overall I can tell you didn't try and just through some wit in from time to time. Probably read his verse and felt disrespected lol. A few cool jabs in there but def nothing huge. Like you were just playing for the score card.

Not a very fun battle to read and it's a shame that outta all the dudes begging for tournaments and leagues, AJ was the only person to accept a battle. All bark, no bite from these text heads.

Vote Cody for the better verse.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Soule'

Echelon's verse...

I'm ECHELON -- PEON -- SCION -- PEON -- SCION//
I have a scorpion sting.. kiss the ring.. kiss the ring.. you remind me of a wack RA SCION//
This bar was not good.
I'm on the onslaught of war; SLAUGHTERING OGRE'S IN WAR//
BOULDER'S OF GORE..you're not a solider in war.. I'll burn you like a ghost on a SMORGASBOARD..//
This bar was painfully bad conceptually.
I'm slaughtering war; OFFSPRING OF WAR; OFFSPRING OF WAR//
I'll pray..than drop you on the concrete floor//
Definitely hard to find something positive about this bar.
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR; dropping atomic bombs//
ATOMIC BOMB..wrestling move..is the only time you have a atomic drop//
Dopest rhyme scheme ever. Really though, lackluster concept.
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR; coughing ghosts flying on smorgasboard//
WHORE THE GORE.. I'm attacking niggers'..like GORE'S IN WAR//
This was dumpster material.
I'm ECHELON -- EON -- PEON -- SCION-- SCION --//
Depart the EON.. I've been battling for eons..ripping apart this PEON//
The repetitive wording is killing you.
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR..causing calamaties and trajedies//
I'm in a calvary..whether you prostrate or pray..you'll call me your majesty//
More bad...
I'm the OFFSPRING OF WAR..causing calamaties and trajedies//
ILL WITH AMNESTY..I'll commit genocide..and kill your family//
Probally the closest you've come to an actual punch...But pretty underwhelming.
I'm causing casulties of war..battle me with force..//
HAPPY HALLOWEEN..I'm stabbing you with gore//
Inneffective.
I'm causing casulties of war..battle me with force..//
RESIDENT'S PRESIDENT'S -- I'LL SPIT GENOCIDAL PESTILENCE//

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Originally Posted by Cody Nash

I swear I ain’t gotta try…you were done the moment you start
Like hiking with no bathroom…I could beat this shit with a fart
This didnt do alot for me. Super light jab.
That was NOT hard, just hard reading - really it was extensive…
Like writin love letters in prison, he gave me a run on sentence
I honestly like the set up better then the endline.
Bars look like choruses..there’s some screws in your head missin
So I’ll drill this loss in his skull like I made an attempt to fix him
Light personal shit
Seems like he’s on drugs, in poor health, and apparently drinks liquor
So I drop bars on the lower echelon like I’ll save him punchin his liver
This felt like a low in the verse. The nameplay had mad potential, but the execution was off.
droppin bars like he’s 13, this forum rappers a deepfake
Just repeats inside his arsenal…like another Halloween remake
This didnt do much for me. Light personal.
This masked man isn’t foolin…you wrestling with a titan
when Omos steps in the ring…AJ’s eclipsed by a giant
Light jab.
Took days to accept this callout..and this was the guy I’m stuck with
Some village idiot from the jungle who’s head might have be shrunken
This wasnt super hard, but the imagery & humor made it one of the better bars of the verse.
It’s quickly I make the cut..it’s no effort no matter what…
Knife this kid for the sport…if the sport was not giving fucks…
Solid jab.
With beef it’s vegetarian habits…compare us and buddy’s squemish
RA Scion? I wrote a track with…you ride in scions to chucky cheeses
This didn't do alot for me.
Beheaded, now he can fall…The kids penance was havin balls…
It’s definitely 2021, how Aj the fuckin menace got Dennis lookin’ adult
Digging the alias flip. Bar of the battles always a solid way to close a verse.

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Vote - Nash

Echelon dropped what has become typical for him. The usual issues. Repetitive wording and poor concepts killed him. Nash was up and down. Some of it felt phoned in or rushed, but he did more then enough to win.

nothing

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It’s quickly I make the cut..it’s no effort no matter what…
Knife this kid for the sport…if the sport was not giving fucks…

wasnt a huge fan of either but it was basically cody nash vs echelon

3-0 ko u can close it

@Kill Spree

Vote AJ because Fresh voted for Nash

Cody Nash wins.