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Due whenever just don’t take forever
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10 lines
Due whenever just don’t take forever
@Lenox
Every1’s gotta pitch in w/ parenting.. or that child won’t get far
It takes a village to raise a kid n the same to help Lenox write a bar
This bitch gets around like crazy… sending 100s of messages
There’s more dudes behind his bars then daveDILLYs last residents
My goons’ll show up n body bag this fag.. str8 diminish ya health
I’ll make you vanish faster than talking Soule into killing himself
Boy stop capping. Ya lyrics never make folks nod n start tapping
If people are moved, it’s cuz I didn’t want them hearing the wack shit u rapping
I got fast punches, that will disrupt this queers groove
Hit’em with a left, right, square in the chest like the scorpion spear move
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Originally Posted by miracle
Smh…Quote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
Dilly exposed him, Mir being elite was always a big myth,
Cuz all the bars u hype up fallacy of wp that were shit to begin with.
Been ass since 2010, another L is what this snake is scared of,
& we can’t tell…. Izzy a retard or not with all the losses he takes Pereira.
Beats his wife till the cops called, ur kids scared to go to bed bruh,
No wonder she thinks a loch necessary, bitch gets terrified whenever u pop ur head up.
Mir’s 400 pounds & growing, eats the plate clean till there’s nothin,Quote:
Originally Posted by 3viction
dudes obsessed, & I bet ur so fuck infatuate all the food inside Dia’s ninja oven.
tryna knuckle up like a sped, we already know who rhyme the best,
I sensory tard battling me, so there won’t be a prob giving em punches till he’s blind & deaf.
@Wuxia since your in here reading .. change the title please
Every1’s gotta pitch in w/ parenting.. or that child won’t get far
It takes a village to raise a kid n the same to help Lenox write a bar
Fire opener.
This bitch gets around like crazy… sending 100s of messages
There’s more dudes behind his bars then daveDILLYs last residents
This was a dope personal attempt, but I can't say it connected with me because to use a bars wordplay the way you did was stale af. There had to be a better way to word this personal without delivering it with the played bars concept you used.
My goons’ll show up n body bag this fag.. str8 diminish ya health
I’ll make you vanish faster than talking Soule into killing himself
Decent. Wasn't big into the "I'll make you vanish faster than" lead in.
Boy stop capping. Ya lyrics never make folks nod n start tapping
If people are moved, it’s cuz I didn’t want them hearing the wack shit u rapping
Wasn't feeling this.
I got fast punches, that will disrupt this queers groove
Hit’em with a left, right, square in the chest like the scorpion spear move
Played concept. Nothing all that different from other stuff I've seen.
Dilly exposed him, Mir being elite was always a big myth,
Cuz all the bars u hype up fallacy of wp that were shit to begin with.
I pronounce fallacy different than how you used it here. It was hard for me to get into this bar because of it.
Been ass since 2010, another L is what this snake is scared of,
& we can’t tell…. Izzy a retard or not with all the losses he takes Pereira.
Fire.
Beats his wife till the cops called, ur kids scared to go to bed bruh,
No wonder she thinks a loch necessary, bitch gets terrified whenever u pop ur head up.
Lmao.
Mir’s 400 pounds & growing, eats the plate clean till there’s nothin,
dudes obsessed, & I bet ur so fuck infatuate all the food inside Dia’s ninja oven.
Lmao.
tryna knuckle up like a sped, we already know who rhyme the best,
I sensory tard battling me, so there won’t be a prob giving em punches till he’s blind & deaf.
Good closer.
I have Miracle with maybe 3 that I liked, 2 of which were okay and had issues with them. Lenox missed on the opener but after that he dropped 4 fresh wordplays and concepts.
v-Lenox
Excuse the break down being a bit off not typing all this out again
Miracle had the botb with the openen, the dilly line was ok didn’t like the finish felt it lacked a hit, soule vanish was cool I liked the people are moved bar.. and didn’t like the closer I think I had the same line and I’d imagine ppl have done it a ton .
Lenox missed with the opener fallacy doesn’t work for me unless I’m missing something , lochness was cool fuck infatuate was cool and I thought the closer was your best bar .
This was super close I think miracle had the better execution did had a few misses , I thought Len had the better concepts and some fresher word plays that I actually haven’t seen before.. my only issue with Len is that loch necessary doesn’t work both ways .. lock necessary sweet Loch Ness ary? Am I missing something . On 2nd read the infatuate is a really cool bar I feel like everytime I read it I lean a different way .
I’m going to give it to miracle it what can go either way
I just think ya both had a miss and I think miracle had one more finish that I enjoyed a bit more .. this was a good battle
Vote miracle
Every1’s gotta pitch in w/ parenting.. or that child won’t get far
It takes a village to raise a kid n the same to help Lenox write a bar
lmao nice personal
This bitch gets around like crazy… sending 100s of messages
There’s more dudes behind his bars then daveDILLYs last residents
I think continuing the same concept in a 10 line battle didnt help you here. especially since it was lighter than the bar before it
My goons’ll show up n body bag this fag.. str8 diminish ya health
I’ll make you vanish faster than talking Soule into killing himself
not a fan of this
Boy stop capping. Ya lyrics never make folks nod n start tapping
If people are moved, it’s cuz I didn’t want them hearing the wack shit u rapping
lol nice misdirect
I got fast punches, that will disrupt this queers groove
Hit’em with a left, right, square in the chest like the scorpion spear move
diggin it
vs
Smh…
Dilly exposed him, Mir being elite was always a big myth,
Cuz all the bars u hype up fallacy of wp that were shit to begin with.
no it doesnt work. how is anyone supposed to know that says fail, a sea without you telling them lol
Been ass since 2010, another L is what this snake is scared of,
& we can’t tell…. Izzy a retard or not with all the losses he takes Pereira.
nice
Beats his wife till the cops called, ur kids scared to go to bed bruh,
No wonder she thinks a loch necessary, bitch gets terrified whenever u pop ur head up.
liked the idea but not the execution
Mir’s 400 pounds & growing, eats the plate clean till there’s nothin,
dudes obsessed, & I bet ur so fuck infatuate all the food inside Dia’s ninja oven.
this was better. wish it would tie in with the ending punch instead of the beginning of the line but this still worked
tryna knuckle up like a sped, we already know who rhyme the best,
I sensory tard battling me, so there won’t be a prob giving em punches till he’s blind & deaf.
solid closer
This is super close. Good battle. I have it 3-3 each. I think i have to go with miracle here. Just felt his verse hit a little harder
v/ miracle
Every1’s gotta pitch in w/ parenting.. or that child won’t get far
It takes a village to raise a kid n the same to help Lenox write a bar
lol good personal, nice bar overall
This bitch gets around like crazy… sending 100s of messages
There’s more dudes behind his bars then daveDILLYs last residents
has potential but didn’t like how you finished it
My goons’ll show up n body bag this fag.. str8 diminish ya health
I’ll make you vanish faster than talking Soule into killing himself
decent
Boy stop capping. Ya lyrics never make folks nod n start tapping
If people are moved, it’s cuz I didn’t want them hearing the wack shit u rapping
lmao I liked this
I got fast punches, that will disrupt this queers groove
Hit’em with a left, right, square in the chest like the scorpion spear move
nah
Vs
Dilly exposed him, Mir being elite was always a big myth,
Cuz all the bars u hype up fallacy of wp that were shit to begin with.
im not sure what’s happening here, wordplay isn’t everything bro
Been ass since 2010, another L is what this snake is scared of,
& we can’t tell…. Izzy a retard or not with all the losses he takes Pereira.
same as last bar, I’m not getting the wp
Beats his wife till the cops called, ur kids scared to go to bed bruh,
No wonder she thinks a loch necessary, bitch gets terrified whenever u pop ur head up.
nah I don’t get it
Mir’s 400 pounds & growing, eats the plate clean till there’s nothin,
dudes obsessed, & I bet ur so fuck infatuate all the food inside Dia’s ninja oven.
lol the wp was better here compared to the others, decent
tryna knuckle up like a sped, we already know who rhyme the best,
I sensory tard battling me, so there won’t be a prob giving em punches till he’s blind & deaf.
bit stretched, wording isn’t the best but wp is ok. Overall the bar is decent at best
Miracle had 2 bars I really liked and a decent one I think, the rest were some misses. Lenox on the other hand committed a cardinal sin by relying solely on wp to make a bar good. Wordplay does not make a bar good bro, it’s everything else associated with it - the wp is just a witty connection. Not the best I’ve read from Lenox and I think he’ll drop better next battle. Overall a decent little battle here but miracle definitely won it.
Vote miracle (please change ur name btw bro it’s feminine af)
lol zelph gtfo my battles retard
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Legit the best verse I’ve ever written
If this is the best verse you’ve ever written then you are fuckin garbage
This should be tie both had slick lines
I feel like Mir bars a lil more creative compared to Len
4-1 mir
Ninja oven was ok
Mira’s opener & the wack shit bar won it here though
A lot wps I wasn’t feeling from Lenox
V. Miracle
5-1 mir wins