Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Kill Spree @plethora
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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Kill Spree @plethora
Aka Phlegm
Phlegm June 2014
murder this chump. if phLu a metaphor illness, then i been Delta Terminal One
but wont needa be there to see him fly through glass, when my two hands improve his vertical jump
plethora nov 2018
ur girl has diseases & unfortunately that ain't a haiku
u been Delta Terminal 1, & will be departing for the sky soon
Remember ^^?
Take these lumps for Recycling & we don’t want answers
We hope the only thing Terminal that Grows from you? is involved w/cancer
aka wreckinEYEZ
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
those anger issues get u paralyzed, kneeling on the floor
one punch Internalize emotions to have no feeling anymore
Vote Kill Spree
Both y’all digging deep for the punches and backstories lmao. But spree came over smoother and connected harder to me. I think pleth had a cool play off the old name but it wasn’t as strong for me when reading them back to back.
internal eyes? internal eyes emotions? some wordplay here im missing or it just doesnt make sense. either way its a miss
spree came pretty simple but it hit and was enough to take the dub
v. spree
I feel the direction plethora was heading to but it fell flat for me, spree was solid and I vouch for him here
Both punches were pretty solid here but ima go hesd and say
Vote - Spree for a better executed personal/punch.
VOTE: Kill spree
Had a weird vibe reading both but in the end I thought the Cancer line hit a little harder than the feeling line which imo coulda been worded into something dope but as is fell flat.
I thought spree had a good use of a personal and a decent concept going, but wording/execution is the only thing that sort of hurt it. I was sure plethora would beat that, but I wasn’t really feeling the internalize wordplay this week.
Vote Kill Spree
Vote Spree
Pretty close battle. BotW for me. I liked both concepts, but at the end of the day, the personal just stung a little more. Good shit from both though.
Am I tripping or is Spree’s bar not complete?
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Nvm… my phone was lagging. Anywho, I’m giving this to Spree. He’s a wiz at finding personals and his seemed a bit harsher than Pleth this time around.
V/ Spree
Kill Spree Wins 7-0