Week 11: Slecht (2-5) vs JEM (1-1) SLECHT WINS

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12.

@slecht

Both yall got until midnight tonight to get verses in
@slecht

My bars are breath taking, compressing ya chest ain’t shit to me
Caught your second win(d), and still couldn’t get another victory
This game is going bayou...Wrap up music is playing at ya burial
Dude died with a blue key like he couldn’t follow a piano tutorial!
At your crib playing BIG, your daughter’s tied up in the basement
Ransom? He either censor…we distorting her features to faceless
I’m really insane but with a line of blow? I’m bringing death to him
Cuz if you advice, then shots go deeper than a talk w/ a therapist
They like JEM kill em… you the best… I say I got this and word!
Ruin dudes career like he went full black face yelling the N word
Levels…My chick rocks Goyard cause her man’s funds are right
You Al Bundy & tell ya bitch goyard… that’s a piss and bud light.

I got you @miracle , good looks. Posting in a few.

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Originally Posted by JEM.

barely have the drive to write text.

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Dressed to kill, I'll be the one he'll get wrecked by.
I'm not the personal tailor for the Medellin cartel, when I give him a colombian necktie
I been an idol & without a nine or a rifle,...either way I'm striking rivals.
He's barely having the drive to write,..nothing will convice us he'll drive up to the finals.
I'll make sure after this, he's aware of his own misery with no trickery.
He reminds me of Amazon fulfillment centers, the way he drones on.... his delivery.
This will be a body due to his role and his imprecision.
Got the bag ready for him like practicing for a cornhole competition.
I'm hitting the nail right in the head as soon as I hammer quick.
If I go raw n Uncut, Jem's shot quicker than bloopers in a Sandler Flick.

Votessss

Will be editing my vote in here

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

Will be editing my vote in here

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Originally Posted by slecht

Dressed to kill, I'll be the one he'll get wrecked by.
I'm not the personal tailor for the Medellin cartel, when I give him a colombian necktie
..nah
I been an idol & without a nine or a rifle,...either way I'm striking rivals.
He's barely having the drive to write,..nothing will convice us he'll drive up to the finals.
..mild
I'll make sure after this, he's aware of his own misery with no trickery.
He reminds me of Amazon fulfillment centers, the way he drones on.... his delivery.
..okish
This will be a body due to his role and his imprecision.
Got the bag ready for him like practicing for a cornhole competition.
...mild
I'm hitting the nail right in the head as soon as I hammer quick.
If I go raw n Uncut, Jem's shot quicker than bloopers in a Sandler Flick.
...mild

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Originally Posted by JEM.

My bars are breath taking, compressing ya chest ain’t shit to me
Caught your second win(d), and still couldn’t get another victory
...win/wind bars done to death..
This game is going bayou...Wrap up music is playing at ya burial
Dude died with a blue key like he couldn’t follow a piano tutorial!
...okay
At your crib playing BIG, your daughter’s tied up in the basement
Ransom? He either censor…we distorting her features to faceless
..i didnt this this hit
I’m really insane but with a line of blow? I’m bringing death to him
Cuz if you advice, then shots go deeper than a talk w/ a therapist
...okish..but the double then/than thru it off
They like JEM kill em… you the best… I say I got this and word!
Ruin dudes career like he went full black face yelling the N word
..u rhymes word....with word... Nah bro
Levels…My chick rocks Goyard cause her man’s funds are right
You Al Bundy & tell ya bitch goyard piss and bud light.
....mild

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Wasnt really feeling either no hate.. But ill give it to slecht for slightly harder connections ..VOTE SLECHT

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Nothing

Vs

Drive to finals
Amazon

Got slehct pretty comfortably here. JEM has some ideas and If he tweaks his wording hell get better

V/ slecht

Slecht -
Necktie - good concept, poor execution think harder
Drive up finals - should be a fast food flip.
Amazon - stretched decent concept but bland
Cornhole kinda corny least it made sense I guess
Sandler - meh

Jem -
Opener - maybe, leave the parentheses out
Blue piano - meh
Big - forced and missed
Blow/add vice - lacking execution
Black face - didn't hit really
Bundy - kinda meh







Vote slecht, both need creativity and execution