Black Cosmic War

Black cosmic war; black conquest war; black conquest war with conquest sin
The embodiment of light and death; the plight of breaths; the eyes of red
I am the sentimental sentimentalist; the sinful sentiment of a arch angel
Carve fables on broad tables; the horsemen's horsemen's finger with a broad sword
Hold the rope of time and space; rhyme is grace; shine with grace
I am the opulent warlord with a broad sword; hold the hands of a angel
I am a angel of light; the angel of sin; the angel of white swords and burning swords
I the angel of white swords and burning swords; hold burning swords with burning force
I am a white angel from Heaven's Gates; holding the hands of Lucifer and God
I shed tears of joy; when Lucifer was sent to Hell; with anguish and sin
I am the sinful sentiment of sinful plagues; the wise Owl of a water storm
I inhaled the sin of many people; than cometh' light with the steeple cathedral....

I understood this one a little bit more... I like your style of poetry - it makes you think

Some people religion motivates them, I found that the more I leave that stuff out the better I write , it's ok to add a few mentions into a rhyme but this was a little confusing to me, more poetic I guess than a rhyme It caught my eye with the title but wasn't what I expected I guess