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30 Mins From now or D/Q
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yo you my as well sit back now cause your rap is wack
just act like ur goin campin and go home and pack
your rhymes make me sick as can be
like i was riden a rocky boat stranded in sea
this rappin shit aint fir you
this battles the same as if i was hitler and you were a jew
you cant win so just go home and cry to mom
cause im about to delete you from this cd-rom
im tired of little kids like you thinkin they good
just try to come where i live out in the hood
you couldnt survive one weak in this palce
before long someone would tear up your face
so its like the same thing here just quit right now
cause i know ur readin this rap and like wow
Seriously...you have no chance...
What the hell was that? kid watch these pulsating hits..
..cause im bringing you down quicker..
..than early ejaculating kids
Your severed, and my high impacts havent been started..
..like planes crashing from takeoff..
..where your left departed
Ive left you bloody with black bruises, by these vet fists..
..you seem to be in a lot of trouble..
..are you dennis the menace?
Im leaving this fat fuck shredded, with onslaughts on skin..
..where i stick my big foot in him..
..to show monstrous kicks
I murdered you on entrance, leaving you with little interest..
..now ive took this win with ease..
..as ive left his verse dead
oooo I cant vote on this sorry but you merked him I like your structure
lol...........................Uppin...............
Uppin for votes.........................please vote......
ill break this down
Scriptious you had no rhyme sceme whatsoever, and the entire thing sounded like shit. Nothin was ryming and refering to dennis the menace was weak. Atleast rhyme menace with grimace. U gots a lot of work to do
Fatboyjoe atleast yer shit rhymed and i could sumwhat enjoy what i was readin. I also liked the part when u refered to Hitler. The was good. I also liked to stranded to sea verse, that was a nice hit, but u still have things to work on/ both of u/
if i could vote i would vote 4 Fatboyjoe
fatboyjoe-your flow and structure was pretty boring and simple. It was below average as a verse. Your punches was very weak and there barely were personals. Matter of fact there were no personals. wordplay was boring and not exciting. Played out rhymes as well. Vocabulary and multis needs big improvement as well. Elevate
Scriptious-I was feeling your flow better than his. It could have been much better though with vocabulary. Pretty decent punches that hit fatboyjoe hard. Also, there were a few personals. Overall you had a good enough structure to win you this battle but u still need to elevate on some things.
v/Scriptious
Tomer..you suck..seriously..if you didnt see nothing in my verse your out of yah head..1-0..Uppin for more pole votes..
wow that was so gay and unedjucated...............^^Quote:
Originally Posted by TomER
what an extremely dumb vote......
ok enough of that...any fool's fool except tomer can see that scriptious ripped it...well him...but they both need improvement...fatboyjoe u need a name change and go to the help forum to improve ur punches and ish....
v/scriptious
go hit up my battle with lunk
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
I will vote on your battle now..cant pole though..but ill give good feedback..Uppin for more votes!..
scriptious you gotta get on peoples dick just to get votes thats sad
My last up..and what do you mean get on his dick? he voted out of his own will..im only returning the vote you peice of shit..Uppin for more votes to close this battle up..
his whole verse rhymed wow ya dumbfuck of a tomer lol
more people need to vote on this... uppin#1........