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G'luck.
Peep his sig for personals...
Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
sorry for dropping later..explorer kept shutting down..
Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
..like grown men groping over babies bits..
..then sticking there fingers in
Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
..id quote mainly on your spits
BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
..then kept hostage in a igloo
You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
..cause im leaving you blown
Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
..so how could you make a big come back..
..where I now end your cause
Bump!
Up..up..and away #1
Born To Kill's Verse: 29/60Quote:
Originally Posted by Born To Kill
Scriptious' Verse: 18/60Quote:
Originally Posted by Scriptious
Vote - Born To Kill
Reasons:
Scriptious' structure almost completely lost me...you had good attempts at punches...but you just couldnt pull through on making harder hits....
Born To Kill
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice metas...wordplay is nice...all ur punches connected...they were witty too...personals were good...werd...
Scriptious
what is up with ur structure man?....that shit is confusing...i thought the flow fell off, but it may just be me cause i never caught on to ur structure...u had some good metas as well...wordplay was ok...like, 1 of ur punches connected good...the rest either barely connected, or didnt at all...no good personals...
Overall
both had some nice metas...Born To Kill had the better structure...as well as the better flow in my eyes...he had better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Born To Kill gets my vote...
VOTE - BORN TO KILL
PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...
BTK-
Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
Pretty good....7/10
Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
Played.......5/10
You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
Decent- 5/10
And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
Wasent really feeling this one 4/10
Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
Ok punch too much to be assumed 4/10
When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
Pretty good 5/10
OVERALL-30
Srip-
Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
..like grown men groping over babies bits..
..then sticking there fingers in
weak...2/10
Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
..id quote mainly on your spits
weak... 3/10
BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
..then kept hostage in a igloo
weak... 2/10
You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
..cause im leaving you blown
Pretty good....6/10
Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
..so how could you make a big come back..
..where I now end your cause
And weak-2/10
OVERALL-15
BTK takes this.... Really one sided
Scrip, work on that structure. It would have killed even a great punch.
The leaving you blown line was pretty good. If would have came with more shit like that it would have been alot closer.
B2K:
Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
8/10... good opener
Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
7.5/10... lol, good wordplay!
You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
8/10... strong hit.
And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
5/10... bleh. not good; not a punch.
Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
8.5/10... great!
When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
6/10... good wordplay. but a weak punch.
overall- 43/60
difference= 17
Scriptious:
Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
..like grown men groping over babies bits..
..then sticking there fingers in
6/10... nice, but it looks like you're dissin yaself...?
Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
..id quote mainly on your spits
8.5/10.... now that shit was raw!
BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
..then kept hostage in a igloo
7/10... lol, nice meta.
You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
..cause im leaving you blown
5/10... um... where's the punch???
Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
..so how could you make a big come back..
..where I now end your cause
3/10... it doesn't rhyme. isn't this a RAP battle???
overall- 29.5/50
difference= 20.5
vote-B2K for the better punches and wordplay. (the #s show he had the bigger percentage)
Come on, peeps...
One more.
Bump...
Please...
Pretty fuckin please...
With sugar and a fuckin cherry on top...
Someone close this!
Peace
Gettin vicious on Scriptious, easily take this win...
Cuz when he takes it outside, he can't carry it back in.
7/10...ok opener/personal
Another whack kid, who's never brought heat...
Too weak to stand a chance, so he hasta take a seat.
5/10...ehhh
You suck at everything, so on skill you can't rely...
S'why Open Mic, Apocalypse, only got two replies.
6/10...nice personal
And neither was good, "basic's" what they said...
But I'm abusing ya brain, so you'll still get a swelled head.
7/10...good punch
Keep foolin yourself, someday you might fool others...
Like you did your siblings, makin them think they have a brother!
4/10...weak
When ya really justa bitch, a pussy for the fuckin...
That's managed to stay a virgin, cuz ya never stop suckin!
5/10......ummmmm, doesnt make sense...if he sucked then he wouldnt be a virgin......deducted
overall - 6.8...u had punches but some didnt hit hard at all...but the personals were good overall...
scriptious
Im Born To Kill, so my instincts are to leave your script in bits..
..like grown men groping over babies bits..
..then sticking there fingers in
3/10...wack
Listen up, why do I even require more hits? you think im boring..
..but, if I wanted to distribute a wack verse..
..id quote mainly on your spits
6/10...alright
BTKs conditions now down, hots spits? im leaving this kid low..
..like a Brazilian abducted to the south pole..
..then kept hostage in a igloo
5/10...would be nice...if the third line rhymed
You resemble your avy, where your shots have nothing to show..
..so why believe you’ll even come near this..
..cause im leaving you blown
4/10...weak personal
Ive left you heading for the floor going face first, hence forward..
..so how could you make a big come back..
..where I now end your cause
2/10....pffft!!!
overall - 4....u should focus more on makin better punches, than flow, the punches were weak, so were the personals..
v/BTK....can yall return the favor plz...link in sig