La Petite Mort (Come Die With Me) f. Kno

this is a remix...

verse one: kno
verse two: introspect (me)

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LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...070/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...862/index.html

Solid beat, except for the chorus wasn't feelin it...But Kno has skills , nice verse, rhyme scheme on point. I was really impressed. Your verse has the sound that needed to be on the track, but in needed to be smoother. The beat was soft and at times the voice tended to make the song harsher than it needed to be. But your lyircs and flow was on point. Overall a really good song, surprise no one has commented yet...but yea man keep it up

^ i totally agree with you, great feedback! thanks

*elevator music*

This is dope bro. Deep too, I you were obviously feelin somethin deep on this. I gotta give ya props, this would be a 8/10 on the scare. Keep doin you an keep it real bro. Dope shit.

sry took so long to rtf man been busy as hell wit work this week

BUT np

i really like how the beat comes in, kno sounds good, nice delivery, flow is smooth, great emotion put in his words, tight rhymes as well

im not crazy bout the hook, but something about it is pretty cool, almost soothing, it goes well with the track as well

u come in nice, flow sounds smooth too, u got a cool voice, my only thing is, ur verse seemed pretty layered and his verse didnt seem like it was much at all, kinda threw it off a bit

i really like thsi track tho, i think if u evened out the vocals a bit it'd b alot better u guys went well together

overall tight track im deff liking it

thanks guys, i appreciate it.

Peepin. this beat is dope man. can feels some emotion shit comin out with this. vocals, got a nice quality, flow is on point. you got a nice rhymescheme goin, nice complex structure. Im really likin this. the chorus i was feelin, i thought it was dope. overall this is a dope track man. keep em comin. get at me with a beat and lets collab. ahaha.

-Peace

yo, sorry for the misinfo on that last one. both cats were dope. Kno had a nice flow, nice rhymes, his voice suited this beat well. he had a nice quality too. !ntro, you had a nice flow too. also very nice lines. the only thing i would suggest, is that mixing had dubs for most of the verse, with this style of beat, id just have the vocals with quiet dubs panned to the left a bit. but thats my personal taste. but yea, get at me for a collab. id love to get somethin goin.

thank you, self. i really appreciate it

like the laidback beat drums are on point, vocals are clean... 1st verse got a nice rythm with the beat like the content, hook comes in real smooth, 2nd verse really pulls the track together again with great content and a smooth transition into the hook! dope track all together

thanks pak

kno=knowP?

whoever it is his flow is dumb nice. he keeps simple but has a complex way about expressing the rhymescheme. some good metaphors thrown in there.

and i like the sample on the chorus. not something you can really rap on to a chorus so good job on that(not sure if its the original chorus or if ya sampled it)

introspect like i say to everybody else that uses double ups. i'm not feeling it that's just my PERSONAL preference. i'm meticulous about using them. flow was on point like knowPs though. good song overall. chorus is sexy kinda nostalgic

listening.....beat starts off melow, then beat drops...dig that....1st verse goes in tough, its in its own unique class because of its delivery, voice tone, and lyrics are pretty well written.....2nd verse (its you i knw) delivery went harder and showed more emotion than the 1st verse...lyrics IMO were best in this verse...ur voice goes real well with this beat....chorus /hook is pretty cool i liked it...overall, sick track my dude

wen u getta chance check mine "I took ur advice and added another verse to dope connect"

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...513/index.html

thanks fellas

damn, i liked this a lot more than i thought i was gonna. first verse was flames, really liked the delievery, unique flow too, i fucked with it.

second verse is cool, such a difference in quality it was weird at first but i got used to it. flow was cool, lyrics were cool too. i liked it as well..

overall this was a good track, not exactly my style but i would bump this shit when i'm high, which i am now.. so yeah. good shit.

thanks