ill go 1st
10-14 lines
no bitin
no hate
no FEEDIN
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ill go 1st
10-14 lines
no bitin
no hate
no FEEDIN
i'll get this started..............................
u did it wrong damn do it again but go under where it says slaughter this mc
YO bitch why u make me go first
cuz yo ugly ass cant spit a verse
yo man check it out fucker u cant beat me thats it
then you'll go home and suck yo momma's dick
im tired of these wack rappers and all this lyrical shit
i'll shoot yo ass like Devil May Cry
cuz i wish yo ass would fuckin die
i spit my rymes first im tryin to be nice
u best start gettin lessons from VANILLA ICE
tryin to challenge me u got alotta nerve
this ryhmes done u just got served
we did that homy ,.....spit yer verse.............................
Now listen and quick ya bitchin...
Your verse isn't good so quick ya wishin...
Everyday you be wishin in my position....
ya be one of my killin witness....
Now you have to go to confess....
That Im the best and I'll make a hole in ya chest....
Now the verse I spit gives you a curse...
While your last Im first, call you the worst...
Now like big pun I'll give you a heart attack...
Dont need a string ass combat...
u suck ............................now lets see our votes
hahaha i beat u in both of them u suck y dont u shut the fuck up
Not enough posts so i cant vote, but ill drop my opinion............
Overall, this was a horribly weak battle
Fatboyjoe:
YO bitch why u make me go first
cuz yo ugly ass cant spit a verse
-weak opener
yo man check it out fucker u cant beat me thats it
then you'll go home and suck yo momma's dick
im tired of these wack rappers and all this lyrical shit
-LAME, cant beat me thats it, suck yo mommas dick, is this elemtary school?
i'll shoot yo ass like Devil May Cry
cuz i wish yo ass would fuckin die
-Weak, weak
i spit my rymes first im tryin to be nice
u best start gettin lessons from VANILLA ICE
-vanilla ice thing was really really weak put at least its some kind of punch
tryin to challenge me u got alotta nerve
this ryhmes done u just got served
-again this is weak, but probably your best line in your whole rap
work on your vocab, it just sounds way too elementary and it gets annoyingm, i think your biggest word in the whole thing was "lyrical" or "vanilla", gotta come stronger
Apocalypse:
Now listen and quick ya bitchin...
Your verse isn't good so quick ya wishin...
Everyday you be wishin in my position....
-quick ya bitchin/wishin...do you mean quit?
ya be one of my killin witness....
Now you have to go to confess....
That Im the best and I'll make a hole in ya chest....
-check ya rhyming, i know all three of these rhymes dont mesh well
Now the verse I spit gives you a curse...
While your last Im first, call you the worst...
-weak, but rhymed, a punch but very weak
Now like big pun I'll give you a heart attack...
Dont need a string ass combat...
-Big pun line made sense, but string ass combat???? dont get...
Work on making sure most of your stuff rhymes
This battle was just plain trash, no good punches, not very good vocab and no personals from the both of you, but in the end i would have to say apocalypse won.
Just because his lyrical vocab was a step above the elementary stuff that fatboyjoe brung which made it a little more interesting to read, like i said this battle was horrible but id try to point out what to work on, both of you need to get some personals in there, come up with some punches, and step up your vocab.
Good luck to both of you
i think both came pretty poorly but
apocalypse had better vocab and better punches
fatboy you jsut cant get away with vanilla ive ligns anymore there so played that its useless. pretty much all your lines were played.
apoc: you have to work on your flow and throw in some multis.
both of you should think about using smarter verse with wit and wordplay because it adds alot to anything.
apoc at least tried to go to a higher level with " the big pun " haert attack line thougb it didnt hit that hard.
v/apocalypse
lil mob........................shut the fuck up bitch!
ok uppin this we need to gert this poll closed.......
vote on this pleese........ uppin..........................
I cant vote yet,but i think that Fatboy won this one by a long shot cuz Apoc kept puting Quick what the hell was that suppose to mean? i dont know and plus Fatboy was more creative then Apoc put this Now listen and quick ya bitchin...
Your verse isn't good so quick ya wishin.... that was bad really bad that was retarded and plus again he put QUICK! what the fuck was that suppose to mean and Fatboy didnt spell any thang wrong and his flowed better like this ...i spit my rymes first im tryin to be nice
u best start gettin lessons from VANILLA ICE
tryin to challenge me u got alotta nerve
this ryhmes done u just got served see that is creative and that is what i think and i wish i could vote cuz FatboyJoe won this one.
lol you just voted for your self lol IP: 226C 3D3D
look at the 11th post and look at the last he changes computer so he ownt get caught but he just did
fatboyjoe loses for voting for himself & is banned.
well, his alias is banned. fatboy i will have an eye o you. read FL rules, stickied at the top of this forum & follow them