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I spent days redoing this mix, I will remix it more later, got other stuff to do.
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I was digging this, was like some neptunes steeze.
Ha, flowing dope. in comparison to the hook, i think the verses makes quite an impact. Suttle scratching on the track too, always dope. Im not too sure if the hook feels a little long. But it sounds all good for the most part, i liked the verses.
@Pair-A-Dyce my bad I didn't get to peep this when you emailed it, I was gonna listen to it today but I seen you posted it so I figured I'd wait and check it on here. It sounds like you're breaking out of your comfort zone more and more with these last 2 tracks man. And I'm digging it. Only thing on this that I would say is add another layer to the last 1-2 times you repeat the hook to add a change. Thought it was funny that @it's Moist pointed that out cuz I was thinking somebody might think it's a little long lol. But I like not following regular song format. So I think if you add another layer to give it a change up a little it'll be good. Dope verses on this joint. And I liked the hook.
Yeah the beat had all the drums in at the end so I was thinking of adding a bridge, but now that I'm sitting here typing about it, I have an idea on how to change it up.
Thanks
Def something diff....like son said this sounds like vintage Neptunes...sounds almost just like that single they had on their first album...remember the name of the joint?....now i'm gonna have to go check for that title...anyways I like the production and the flows on point...not typically my kind of joint but I go toward anything different so it was cool....I do think something could have been done diff with the ending of the joint but overall it was solid...
dope neptunes selection .... overall this is dope ... not much i can say really... you did your thing
I love this beat, man. Really cool how you tackled this. That Neptunes shit, though! Haha.. The hook is sick. Your spitting surprised me. You remind me of a cross between like... K-Os and Lupe Fiasco. Haha... I was super into this. I'm definitely going to replay this a few times without a doubt my dude. We should get on something together. Hit me up...
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Yeah beat was definitely dope. flow was perfect for this track. upbeat with good energy. Production value was real slick. Only thing i would say could use some improvement is the hook, it did feel a little long. Overall though man, this is one of my favorite tracks ive heard from you. Scratching on the beat was dope too, dont know if u had any hand in that but i liked it.
the beat is a neptunes track @Mr. Write
This was cool, different. I remember using that neptunes sound when I started making beats 10 years ago in FL studio. Brings back memories. Why aren't the artists on this site into engineers and professional vocals/mixes? Regardless thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.
Now it my thread.
I was an audio engineer for about a year. I have credits on this album https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tha_Thug_ShowQuote:
Originally Posted by Schizmatic
the mix on this was tight... and quality was good. i really didn't like the beginning, but when u start rapping i was vining to it and liked it... but not feel in the chorus. overall dope track g!
Here slave @Emilyinthepool
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Originally Posted by Pair-A-Dyce
Who told you, 'treat Em mean, keep Em keen' worked for me?
Fine. I will check it, Master, and drop a few thoughts in a moment.
Nice intro into this track. Cool vocals, I'm used to that now.
Oh the rapping's nice. Nice extension of voice. Nice Rrrrrrr'ing to certain words lol.
On point with delivery of lyrics, your pace is great.
I like that you change the direction of your voice in the versus, giving it more
character and personality. Oh, nice lil bit of scratching there lol, just heard that.
Ok, I liked this. Personally, I preferred the rapping more than the chorus, just thought it
had a gutsy vibe about it, you know, words flipped and launched and spat really well.
Good job Pair-A-Dyce.
Nice one.
The beat is dope fam. I like your flow on the verses. I didnt like the hook that much though.
on the production side, mixing/mastering is decent.
Was not expecting that at all haha. Dope shit dude.
The beat is nice, got a real locomotion feel to it. its the little things that you add to it that make it stand out, scratches, drum rolls etc.
The hook is cool, a little long but done well. I dont know if you used a delay or just overdubbed it but it meshes nicely.
I was really curious as to how you were gonna flow to an up-tempo beat like this, and im glad you went the speed route. Although the verse-hook ratio leaves some to be desired. Delivery is nice, mix is solid. Lyrically its not bad, got some inners and such.
in all though im likin this.
Haha, interesting beat and sound you're going for, Dice.
So yeah, nothing like I've heard on this site before. It's... unique? Not a fan of the chorus. A bit... meh. Skip it over to the verse. Ok... pretty good shit. Pacing/flow is on point. The delivery is mellow and meshes well with the overall vibe. Good aura/presence all-around. Flow's superb. Refreshing and different. Overall, this is cool as shit, Dice. P.S - the chorus gets more enjoyable as I go on throughout the track.
Keep it up!
thought this was fucking dope bro, seriously, loved all aspects of it, good shit
The Chorus has a really nice sound to it, but its feelin like its running a little long.. The first verse rapping is a nice switch up tho... Second verse has a dooope as cut in with the voice change like the chorus, definitely a nice touch there, and the scratches hahah nice This is definitely really catchy haha Only thing I could point out that seemed a little ehh to me was the length of the chorus, other than that, this is a banger for sure. Good job bro
I hate this beat..flow is air tight tho.. nice delivery and tone.. the hook makes this interesting but im not sure if I like it..its different and creative I give u that tho.. you nice on the mic tho really like the flow and how you play wit it..vibing real well with the beat.. I wouldn't bump this again tho. decent track.