Nominated for the 5th fucking time :ROFL: this got the HOF spot trust me.
You should lead the poetic team for my crew.
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Nominated for the 5th fucking time :ROFL: this got the HOF spot trust me.
You should lead the poetic team for my crew.
I know and that's why I love your feedQuote:
Originally Posted by el poeta
big up's thanks for the feed...............
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I dont write to make the Hall of fame I writeQuote:
Originally Posted by .Jay.
for the fun of it If I make it oh well.............
Hmm Nice Attitude.
But if it's not really worthy of HoF what does that say ?Quote:
Originally Posted by .Jay.
Critical is a very good writer with alot of potential... i mean alot of potential, i can't wait to see him reach that ability he has to the fullest... once he adapts into his own, personally i think he could be one of the best poets on the site.
But this particular piece has alot of flaws in it... It's not HoF worthy... Beleive me when i say, if he coninues he WILL have HoF thats are more than worthy...
Thanks And I agree in my eye's hof dont mean anythingQuote:
Originally Posted by el poeta
I just Write for the love of writing so If i dont make it
so what if I do so what and el poeta I think am far from
the best poet on this site to me it's you word.......
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Originally Posted by Critical.
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I think you should definitely keep writing,I see serious potential behind those lines,you have a very interstinbg style,and to be honest I really liked it,the back bone part of this poem was what really set it off for me,it was beautifully worded, you did a very good job there.....you were lacking in imagery which is a very important part of a poem....and if you could add this in to your peice, it would be outstanding, The vocab was top notch and I'm glad to see that you didn't dumb it down for the less intelligent people of RB.As el poeta said I don't think this is HOF worthy just yet...but if you keep writing and elevating your skills you will get in to HOF very soon.I'm glad to see your attitude to writing,that you do not care about HOF and that you are writing because you enjoy it,this is the way it should be done. 'Do not write for HOF or Legends...Write for yourself' that is what I go by.This is a very good peice and as I said you have crazy potential....keep at it,and we will see you in HOF soon.nice job
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Originally Posted by The Witness.
Damn Hella feed back love it thanks
an lot Witness and What ever happens
with hall of fame happens whether I make
it or lot now that's get of that topic just
want some more feed back thanks people.
I was feelin this piece man ...
It had deep feeling to it ...
Read kinda like a mix of a poem/rap verse ...
Good usage in vocabulary... The flow was on point...
Metaphors were there.... and Excellent structure....
Word man thanks for the feed back........Quote:
Originally Posted by Pusha C
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