Out Of Training...

Let's go...


we can... spit it together... you and ya folks...
if Av step up... ya crew backs down... like he was defendin the post...
remember the quotes... you spit sweet 16 is nothin,
Av drops twice... half worthless bars... and 16 is something...
don't face him'... best thing to do dunny, its-
simply funny... Everyone knew about your respect... Noone expected you to run from him...
in this test... words are weapons... thou shalt protect,
if punches were bullets... than Av's paper scraps burrow holes in ya chest...
it's all over when writer's get blocked... regime takes shots,
Why do you ask..!? Cause WRITER's just WATCH..!
no sympathy... that's ok... it was a good try the first time,
yea I said I respected yall... but didn't mention you didn't suck... did I..!?
let's keep it reel... everything that you see aint what it seems,
and battles that you thought you had won... only happen on the screen in ya dreams...
who next to place bets on vets who vote on text,
rep perfect sayin they worthless... When Av said it first..?!
let's get down to business... verses... end that sentence,
fuck new crews... 1 word to mention... Av ripped yall worst...
breakin ya backs... destroy the alliance,
fags... bitches... pussies... and retires with alzheimers...
rip the mask of ya murder-ers... Av has the burden of-
rememberin everyone in ya crew he beat... cause ya name... never heard of...
if you never ripped a mic...
sit at home take punches and adverbs to be tight... might be a Jae Cyph type... WORD..!
Av's on a murderin rampage,
flyweight's can get it to... I'm the beginnin'... Av'll rip the BluePriNt right off the damn page...
shredded lungs...failed gas masks...all burned from this verse,
AI EXECUTED...like GI'S who took a "turn" for the WORST...
hum... Guess the weather man must truely be insane,
this faggot is SUNSHINE.. Of course there's no chance of reign...
ya actually says that ya good.. either these kid's jokin,
or thats the biggest lie since Kobe said that he didn't poke it...
ya hype to test but I suggest you hide from fightin text,
I'll let the shotty breathe on'em, now WATCH the sighed effects...
Noone believes in this heathen or that we're equal and even steven,
so... just bow-out now... like Chinese people leavin...
look at you fucks... scared to call Av out,
cause in rhyme bouts... you'll have to hit #9 to get a line out...
I'm a rounded emcee... just for fun I spit heartless,
RB didn't lose it's competitive edge... never had one to start with...
my strategy's nice... blast herbs twice with plenty heaters,
I guess I'll refrain from usin punches... since none of you have any either...
and I am the king of battles... and I ruin parties well,
cause I merked the illest cat who never lost on Rapbattles...
Av' is a roamer... I'm bound to mark ya flesh with harsh hands,
cause gettin bayou is far easier than leasin the marshlands...
it's a lame name that's scared to speak and take claim,
YOUR scripts are why text sucks... since we're playin the blame game...
I know my scheme is sick... only ya boyfriends seen you spit,
RB says' my verses are 'average'... to say their 'mean' as shit...
an killings thees like taking candy from babies and shakin them willingly,
he's not only the total package... Av is the only winning spree...
and for the net thugs you cook what..? what kinda shit are ya dishin?,
meaningless..! who'd respect a emcee... that raps in their KITCHEN..?!
Regime only crew known... to battle for spots or numbers,
in competition... squad only battle for summers... shit's hot..!
Last year is over... Guess Av'll end ya formal run,
is it just me... or do battle lines equal 4 normal ones..?
just to rap this up... I'm unravelin my greatness,
and if a lil goes a long way... than ya brain's travelin the nation... DAMN..!

DONE TRAINING... who want what..?! Nothing but keystyles... you can ask bribeone... on aim... nothing but ill...

Nice post AV But

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Crew Moderator-13th Disciple, Avalon


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so now you get crew votes HUH

wow your elite I should post are battle for one of the mods and have it deleted cause you know crews cant vote

take away 13th's vote... and still there's 4... to your nothing... that's the only crew vote in there... and on that I would agree...


next bitch or gripe..?

Nope

No more bitching its not even worth it

This was GOOD POST

NO BEEF

You have sum Skillz

COOL everybody is happy now

nice drop

liked these lines

'ya actually says that ya good.. either these kid's jokin,
or thats the biggest lie since Kobe said that he didn't poke it...
ya hype to test but I suggest you hide from fightin text,
I'll let the shotty breathe on'em, now WATCH the sighed effects...

flow was tight thru out word play picked up in the last half of it
a clear message...dope

This was pretty enjoyable to read. Felt like a Skillz type freestyle. Every mechanic was in place, all basic things needed. It was an overall good drop.There was nothing spetacular but it is better than alot in open mic. Good drop.

nice shit man.. I was feelin' sum of the wordplay, alot of it was played lines, but if it was a keystyle that's understandable 'cause it was long as fuck... you had some funny origional ideas too,

".... just for fun I spit heartless,
RB didn't lose it's competitive edge... never had one to start with...
my strategy's nice... blast herbs twice with plenty heaters,
I guess I'll refrain from usin punches... since none of you have any either..."

^like that.. lol..

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Sighed Effects Line Was Flipped From UPN. . = /