just a verse for (maybe) a future song...
verse: introspect (me)
beat/chorus: dj corbett
[SOUNDCLICK]9884382[/SOUNDCLICK]
LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...120/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...125/index.html
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just a verse for (maybe) a future song...
verse: introspect (me)
beat/chorus: dj corbett
[SOUNDCLICK]9884382[/SOUNDCLICK]
LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...120/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...125/index.html
Sup man, just peepin your track here, the beat is real nice! Im diggin the chorus, its real tight. verse comes in on point, flow is tight, quality is nice. you got a nice presence here, it fits the beat real well. it was mixed pretty well, and it meshed with the beat nice. you delivered it tight too. overall nothin bad to say, Id love to hear the full track man. and YESSS my mixtape is comin soon, just waitin on the cover art an shit. so stay tuneeed!
-Peace
nice fuckin production man, pro soundin shit.... not my style, and not something i would listen to , but sounds very good dude.... like somethin youd hear on the radio, so good job man
damn the beat and hook are crazy i really love em, not feeling the way u came on but as the verse went on i started to like it more, the flow is wat caught me off guard, im not too crazy about ti but it does ride proper, good mixing here also
overall nice job not exactly my type but deff pretty nice
pls rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...034/index.html
you killed this shit homie..
you are a really good rapper? how did you do this?
i will pay you if you could teach me.
^ hahaha
thanks guys
the beat is hard...chorus is catchy...not bad a track right here...need a bit of polishing but like you said its a rough version
Chorus is dope. Were you ever named intention? Sounds like a dude i used to listen to. quality is good. creative lyrics....i really felt the imagery. Delivery was on point. Nothing negative to say except maybe you should make this into a whole song, it was pretty dope and i was mad that it was so short
thank you