ok imma give u some honest feedback...
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I'm baby soft, but it just comes with the flow
Find a used condom in your room, your girls says I dont know
But we fucked..and hell yeah it was fun
I'd come back for more, but you got a gun
pretty funny opener...talkin bout some real life hood shyt...we all been there...lol...good flow on it...multiz did ok...n ur wording was basic but tha idea was too...so its all kewl...
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Sittin on your porch man, I see you empty and hollow
I think to myself man "damn, am I bein followed?"
This is an average day, in the life of the Prime
Drivin in my car listenin to corona and lime
i dont rele understand tha first line...2nd line decribes some MORE HOOD SHYT...i used to like jump alot...pull my gun on my shadow n shyt...lol so ur a PRIME?...like transformers?...lol n i like that corona n lime shyt...real imagery...u want pplz to see what u see when u write...flow was good...wordin shud be upped...
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Stop by a club and dance with some chicks
Not in the south man I don't get down with hicks
I hears some gun shots man I gotta go
Run outta the place before the damn cops show
first bar was funny...i mean some basic club shyt...but ur wrong bout tha south buh we aint no hickz...2nd bar was EVEN MORE HOOD SHYT...
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Ridin in my chevy fuck ya caprice
Wavin around my chrome piece sayin "fuck the police"
But I aint NWA thats not what I say
What I'm sayin is that I'm the badass of the partay
So you can sit around with a gun waitin for me to come
But man guess what I'm still fuckin her at her occu-pa-tion (ock-q-pay-shun)
IM GONE ILL FINISH FEEDING THIS LATER...